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My mother is the greatest women in my life.

My mother is the greatest women in my life. Ymmk5
Her figure is not too tall, but very attractive. She has a long and smooth hair, black eyes and a smallmouth all of which create a harmonious face for my mother. To me, mother's hands is my favorite part. Regardless of its small, it always make me warm. She not only a mother but also she is a inspirational friend. Whenever I feel under pressure, she will encourage and support me a lots. When I'm with her, I feel very comfortable and able to be myself.
Her figure is not too tall,
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attractive. She has a long and smooth hair, black eyes and a
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smallmouth
all of which create a harmonious face for my mother. To me, mother's hands is my favorite part. Regardless of its
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small
, it always
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make
me warm. She not
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a mother
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also
she is
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inspirational friend. Whenever I feel under pressure, she will encourage and support me
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a lots
. When I'm with her, I feel
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comfortable and able to be myself.

IELTS essay My mother is the greatest women in my life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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