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My mom is a great women. I am like her

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My mom is a great women. When I come to the world, she helps me to grow up very well and learn me how to become stong and independent women. Now I so grateful to her for let us study at the university also she paid all to have for us. In a nutshel, I am a teacher now and learn my student to speak their mind also break the ice when I was a jam-packed I let some of them to take the reins so they don't drive me crazy and don't kill my vibe in this way I learn them to become independent. Truth be told I love them and learn a lot of thing of them. I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth so I will work hard and making money to help other people, like mother like daughter not in a flash day become like that.
My mom is a great
women
. When I
come
to the world, she
helps
me to grow up
very
well and
learn
me how to
become stong
and independent women.
Now
I
so
grateful to her for
let
us study at the university
also
she paid all to have for us. In a
nutshel
, I am a teacher
now
and
learn
my student to speak their mind
also
break the ice when I was a jam-packed I
let
some
of them to take the reins
so
they don't drive me crazy and don't kill my vibe in this way I
learn
them to become independent. Truth be
told
I
love
them and
learn
a lot of thing
of them. I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth
so
I will work
hard
and making money to
help
other
people
, like mother like daughter not in a flash day become like that.
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IELTS essay My mom is a great women. I am like her

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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