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My mom is a great women. I am like her

My mom is a great women. I am like her e3LJ7

My mom is a great women. When I come to the world, she helps me to grow up very well and learn me how to become stong and independent women. Now I so grateful to her for let us study at the university also she paid all to have for us. In a nutshel, I am a teacher now and learn my student to speak their mind also break the ice when I was a jam-packed I let some of them to take the reins so they don't drive me crazy and don't kill my vibe in this way I learn them to become independent. Truth be told I love them and learn a lot of thing of them. I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth so I will work hard and making money to help other people, like mother like daughter not in a flash day become like that.

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helps
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very
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 me how to Possible spelling mistake found.becomes tongbecome strongbecome songbecome stonebecome Stonebecome Strong
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, I am a teacher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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learn
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let
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some
 of them to take the reins This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they don't drive me crazy and don't kill my vibe in this way I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollgetreadstudypick upreceive
learn
 them to become independent. Truth be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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love
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learn
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a lot of thing
 of them. I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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hard
 and making money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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people
, like mother like daughter not in a flash day become like that. 