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Climate change and economy effect on people life

Climate change and economy effect on people life APGBM
At the present time, the proliferation of changing in climate and economic are drastically increasing in the globe. Due to changes in it we faces numerous people in our life. In this essay I discussed the both views, thus my inclination with proper justification for above mentioned notion I discussed in the further paragraphs. To begin with, there are plethora of problems due to change in the weather. The first and foremost issue is that, it is wrost impact on farming. Nowadays increasing the air pollution it bad effect on weather. This can be evidenced by in Times of India, in India last winter due to high rain in the season many crops was damaged such as, vegetables, tobacco. In addition, it is bad effects on middle class family because it was only one source they could earn money. Although, many farmers faces lots of problems in their life when the weather change. Moreover, many individuals show problem regarding to their jobs like whenever the climate like rainbow they stuck in it. On the other hand, despite the having weather Problem the economy also impact on people life. First of all, if the particular country economy steadily down it is awful to the people such as, sometimes people lost their jobs and bad effect on salary. Furthermore, perhaps the government launch couple of scheme and government mostly focous on that scheme In conclusion, it is obvious that the overall changes the climate and economy, from my perspective mostly effect by the climate change in the country
At the present time, the proliferation of changing in
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climate
and economic are
drastically
increasing in the globe. Due to
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changes
in
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it
we
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faces
numerous
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people
in our life. In this essay I discussed the both views,
thus
my inclination with proper justification for above mentioned notion I discussed in the
further
paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, there are plethora of
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problems
due to
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change
in the
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weather
. The
first
and foremost issue is that, it is
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wrost
impact on farming. Nowadays increasing the air pollution
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it
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bad
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effect
on
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weather
. This can
be evidenced
by in Times of India, in India last winter due to high rain in the season
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many
crops
was damaged
such as, vegetables, tobacco.
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, it is
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bad
effects on middle
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class
family
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because
it was
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only
one source they could earn money. Although,
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many
farmers faces lots of
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problems
in their life when the
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weather
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change
.
Moreover
,
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many
individuals
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show
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problem
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regarding to
their jobs like whenever the
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climate
like rainbow they stuck in it.

On the other hand
, despite the having
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weather
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Problem
the economy
also
impact on
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people
life.
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First of all
, if the particular country economy
steadily
down it is awful to the
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people
such as,
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sometimes
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people
lost their jobs and
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bad
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effect
on salary.
Furthermore
, perhaps the
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government
launch couple of scheme and
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government
mostly
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focous
on that scheme

In conclusion
, it is obvious that the
overall
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changes
the
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climate
and economy, from my perspective
mostly
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effect
by the
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climate
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change
in the country
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IELTS essay Climate change and economy effect on people life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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