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My lovely hometown is Khorezm

My lovely hometown is Khorezm OgMOk
My lovely hometown is Khorezm. Khorezm Region as it is still more commonly known, is a region of Uzbekistan located in the northwest of the country in the lower reaches of the Amu-Darya River. It borders with Turkmenistan, Karakalpakstan and Bukhara Region. I love to live hare because the environment is so comfortable and make me always splendid in here Also love friendly people too. I love everything belongs my hometown where I was born and grew. The major towns include Urganch, Khiva, Xonqa, Shovot, and Pitnak. The city of Khiva in Khorezm Region is a UNESCO World Heritage Site with world-famous architectural monuments making Khiva one of the main centers for international tourism in the country. Khorezm is a place where many famous scholars were born, such as Abu Rayhan Biruni and Al-Khwarizmi. I am glad and proud to be here.
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IELTS essay My lovely hometown is Khorezm

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