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My love I wanna stay thank you

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I would say thank you because you came into my life and made my life Joyful. Without you I just spend my life like the moon Without sun. You came into my life and filled my life with a lot of excitement, happiness, romance. Baby you are super good, charming and supportive. Every Time I saw you and felt yes you are the one who I want in my life. Baby I miss you so much and I know you are missing me the same as me. But this is our test. God wants to know how much these two people are committed toward each other. This journey has a lot of struggle but at the end of day if I will get you then it all worth it for me.
I would say thank you
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spend my
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like the moon Without sun. You came into my
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and filled my
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with
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a lot of
excitement, happiness, romance. Baby you are super
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, charming and supportive. Every Time I
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you and felt yes you are the one who I want in my life.

Baby I miss you
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much and I know you are missing me the same as me.
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this is our
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. God wants to know how much these two
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are committed
toward each other. This journey has
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a lot of struggle
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you then it all worth it for me.

IELTS essay My love I wanna stay thank you

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
131 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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