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My love I wanna stay thank you

My love I wanna stay thank you 3YAJY

I would say thank you because you came into my life and made my life Joyful. Without you I just spend my life like the moon Without sun. You came into my life and filled my life with a lot of excitement, happiness, romance. Baby you are super good, charming and supportive. Every Time I saw you and felt yes you are the one who I want in my life. Baby I miss you so much and I know you are missing me the same as me. But this is our test. God wants to know how much these two people are committed toward each other. This journey has a lot of struggle but at the end of day if I will get you then it all worth it for me.

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 spend my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
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 like the moon Without sun. You came into my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
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 excitement, happiness, romance. Baby you are super This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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, charming and supportive. Every Time I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 you and felt yes you are the one who I want in my life.

Baby I miss you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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But
 this is our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. God wants to know how much these two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 toward each other. This journey has Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of struggles".a lot of struggles
a lot of struggle
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but
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of day if I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 you then it all worth it for me. 