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my local famous about pottery. . . . . . . 7LB9y
my local famous about pottery. we are stared make pottery in thousand years ago. reason it is famous because it is beautiful and durable. my pottery town special about pattern and designs. some famous ceramic companies in local is Thien Long ceramics. . . and some small workshop by locater built and live on making pottery. i hope pottery of my town will famous more and more in the future. nfuieywtv8retnhe8tn84curpv8
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IELTS essay my local famous about pottery. . . . . . .

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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