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As can be seen in the picture, there are nine steps involved in the process of recycling plastic bottles, beginning with bottles being thrown out and finishing with end products being made.

As can be seen in the picture, there are nine steps involved in the process of recycling plastic bottles, beginning with bottles being thrown out and finishing with end products being made. kWXy8
journey to discover educational development, I'm Đan, 19 years old, My school is Đồng Nai, As can be seen in the picture, there are nine steps involved in the process of recycling plastic bottles, beginning with bottles being thrown out and finishing with end products being made. Overview: It is apparent that the village of Ryemouth has undergone some major changes, with the most noticeable one being the construction of sports areas, the addition of more housing facilities, and the demolition of the fishing port.
journey
to discover educational development, I'm
Đan
, 19 years
old
, My school is
Đồng
Nai
, As can be
seen
in the picture, there are nine steps involved in the process of recycling plastic bottles, beginning with bottles
being thrown
out and finishing with
end
products
being made
.

Overview: It is apparent that the village of
Ryemouth
has undergone
some
major
changes
, with the most noticeable one being the construction of sports areas, the addition of more housing facilities, and the demolition of the fishing port.
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IELTS essay As can be seen in the picture, there are nine steps involved in the process of recycling plastic bottles, beginning with bottles being thrown out and finishing with end products being made.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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