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My hobby is listening to music

My hobby is listening to music gb3el

. Listening to music is my hobby. I started my hobby 3 years ago. I share this hobby with my best friend. But she likes listening to Kpop music and I usually listen to US-UK music. I often listen when I do the housework and I have a free time. I’m interested in gentle melody. I usually listen to US-UK music. Because it can improve my English skill. Sometimes I also listen to music and dancing. I feel so relaxed when doing it. I also often collect music discs. In the future, I want to be a musician.

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 Listening to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
 is my hobby. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 my hobby 3 years ago. I share this hobby with my best friend. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 she likes listening to Possible spelling mistake found.PopKOPPOPK pop
Kpop
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music
 and I usually
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listen
 to US-UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattendgetacceptadmitobservetune in
listen
 when I do the housework and I have a free time. I’m interested in gentle melody. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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usually
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listen
 to US-UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 I also
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listen
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
 and dancing. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 relaxed when doing it. I also
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often
 collect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
 discs. In the future, I want to be a musician. 