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My favourite way to communicate .

My favourite way to communicate . eb1Mx
In this modern time of technology, smartphone, computer and other communication tools have become of utmost important in our daily life. They are several different ways to communicate with friends, but as far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face with my friends. First of all, face-to-face communication is easy for me to talking with friends. It's can seeing my friend's face and hearing their voice when we talk. Also, being face-to-face communication can quickly get response and stronger connections with each other's. Through this way conversation, I can truly know what they are feel with body language and eyes contact. In addition, face-to-face communication doesn't have waiting for reply on texting message. Otherwise, if my friend is feeling stressful or unhappy, I can't give them a massive hug. Plus, it is without the chance to interact with my friends on face-to-face. By and large, face-to-face communication is the marvellous choice for me. It is good for understanding and more effective.
In this modern time of technology, smartphone, computer and other
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communication
tools have become of utmost
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important
in our daily life. They are several
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different
ways to communicate with
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friends
,
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but
as far as I
am concerned
, I prefer face-to-face with my friends.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, face-to-face
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communication
is easy for me to talking with
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friends
. It's can seeing my friend's face and hearing their voice when we talk.
Also
, being face-to-face
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communication
can
quickly
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get
response and stronger connections with each other's. Through this way conversation, I can
truly
know what they are
Consider using a past participle here: "felt".
feel
with body language and eyes contact.
In addition
, face-to-face
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communication
doesn't have waiting for reply on texting message.
Otherwise
, if my
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friend
is feeling stressful or unhappy, I can't give them a massive hug. Plus, it is without the chance to interact with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
on face-to-face.

By and large, face-to-face
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communication
is the
Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.
marvellous
choice for me. It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for understanding and more effective.

IELTS essay My favourite way to communicate .

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
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