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My favourite Tourist spot

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Shimla is my favourite tourist destination and it is the capital city of Himachal pradesh. This beautiful city is surrounded by huge mountains and it located at an elevation of 1200 meters above sea level. Shimla is one of the most beautiful places in India. People from all over the world visit this city. It is also known as the summer capital of India. Tourists get many adventurous activities to participate in snow like skiing and surfing. The most famous spot is the Jakhoo hill, from where the entire city can be seen with a 360 degree view. People buy different types of sweaters as it is very famous for it. the landscape of the city is awesome and represents like a step by step construction. The Kalka - shimla railway route is amazing and travelling in train in that route gives breathtaking views. It is recognised as the UNESCO heritage site.

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Shimla

is my

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favourite

tourist destination and it is the capital city of

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Himachal pradesh
. This

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful

city

is surrounded

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by
 huge mountains and it located at an elevation of 1200 meters above sea level.

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Shimla

is one of the most

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beautiful

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places
 in India.

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People

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from
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also

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known
 as the summer capital of India. Tourists

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get

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many

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adventurous
 activities to participate in snow like skiing and surfing. The Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmost.most!most?most:most,most;
most

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famous

spot is the

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Jakhoo

hill, from where the entire city can be

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seen

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with
 a 360 degree view.

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People

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buy

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different

types of sweaters as it is

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very

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famous

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for
 it. the landscape of the city is awesome and represents like a step by step construction. The

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Kalka

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shimla

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railway
 route is amazing and travelling in train in that route gives breathtaking views. It Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphis.is!is?is:is,is;
is

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recognised

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as
 the UNESCO heritage site.