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my favourite leisure activity

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There are many leisure activities in my leisure time, but Watching television is one of the activities I like to do in my spare time. I often watch Tv after I do my homework, in the evening, when I was about to sleep, and every time I have free time. I watch movies five times a day. I have watched many kind of movies such as cartoon, school movies, comedy or short videos about study, eating, adventure, English. I watch Television in my bedroom or living room. I usually watch Tv alone, sometimes I watch Tv with my cousin and my friends. Watching Television is my favourite leisure activity, because when I watch videos, I feel relaxed and it makes me happy after a long day tired.
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of movies such as cartoon, school movies, comedy or short videos about study, eating, adventure, English.
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Television in my bedroom or living room.
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IELTS essay my favourite leisure activity

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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