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my favorite ice cream flavor

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well, we all have what we call comfort food, our go to meal every time we're not feeling fine. mine is ice cream that i never thought of being specific to what flavor is my favorite, neither that i thought it's important to consider too. then I've watched this movie entitled "fatherhood", all of a sudden i decided to pick my favorite flavor of ice cream, that is coffee flavor. allow me to be biased as coffee is our favorite morning drink, but coffee flavored ice cream is so good.
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fatherhood
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IELTS essay my favorite ice cream flavor

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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