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causes and solutions of traffic congestion

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Long-hour commutes and maddening delays have been a shared problem among cities around the world. There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon, some of which will be addressed in this essay with several viable solutions suggested. Generally, the causes of traffic congestion are twofold: the heavy traffic during rush hour and the imbalance between city population and the roadways provided. Before and after office hours, a vast array of people pour into the streets, which swiftly attribute to traffic slowdown. Moreover, it can be seen that the city population shows no sign of decreasing, which means more people, fewer roadways. This imbalance between supply and demand has led to traffic delays. Even though traffic congestion is unavoidable, there are several strategies to reduce the likelihood of being stuck in these delays. The proposal that the government should encourage the public transportation use of city dwellers is advanced as a possible solution. In order to draw the public’s attention to public transport, the authorities should seriously allocate more funds for the upgrade and maintenance of public transport and its service. A hygienic and punctual bus possibly attracts a considerable number of commuters to use the service, as a result, decrease the mass of vehicles on the street. Another solution to this is for the government to construct more boulevards and flyovers, providing a variety of routes for drivers to choose from as well as reducing the volume of traffic at each roadway of the city. To conclude, the problem, caused by the massive number of vehicles entering roadways during rush hours and the lack of adequate avenues available for the growing population, can be partly alleviated by upgrading the transport infrastructure and enhancing the transport service.
Long-hour commutes and maddening delays have been a shared problem among
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cities
around the world. There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon,
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some
of which will
be addressed
in this essay with several viable solutions suggested.

Generally
, the causes of
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traffic
congestion are twofold: the heavy
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traffic
during rush hour and the imbalance between city population and the
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roadways
provided.
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Before
and after office hours, a vast array of
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people
pour into the streets, which
swiftly
attribute to
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traffic
slowdown.
Moreover
, it can be
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seen
that the city population
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shows
no
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sign
of decreasing, which means more
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people
, fewer
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roadways
. This imbalance between supply and demand has led to
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traffic
delays.

Even though
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traffic
congestion is unavoidable, there are several strategies to
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reduce
the likelihood of
being stuck
in these delays. The proposal that the
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government
should encourage the
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public
transportation
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use
of city dwellers
is advanced
as a possible solution. In order to draw the
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public’s
attention to
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public
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transport
, the authorities should
seriously
allocate more funds for the upgrade and maintenance of
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public
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transport
and its service. A hygienic and punctual bus
possibly
attracts a considerable number of commuters to
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use
the service,
as a result
, decrease the mass of vehicles on the street. Another solution to this is for the
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government
to construct more boulevards and flyovers, providing a variety of routes for drivers to choose from
as well
as reducing the volume of
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traffic
at each
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roadway
of the city.

To conclude
, the problem, caused by the massive number of vehicles entering
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roadways
during rush hours and the lack of adequate avenues available for the growing population, can be partly alleviated by upgrading the
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transport
infrastructure and enhancing the
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transport
service.
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IELTS essay causes and solutions of traffic congestion

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