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My favorite friend. A paragraph about 100 words

My favorite friend. A paragraph about 100 words VYYg7

My favorite friend is none other than my brother. We are sisters of the same family, so the closer we become, the more we become friends. My brother is a cute boy, he is smart and mischievous. A six-year-old boy enters elementary school with an innocent spirit and still loves to watch and play mobile games. A young boy who is talkative and irritable, sometimes also becomes obedient and helps his family with what he can. A little boy who sometimes stutters but is someone I love a lot. A relative is also a friend. The person I will always accompany and help throughout my education and in my daily life with my family. Talk, share, encourage each other's joys and sorrows.

My favorite friend is none other than my brother. We are sisters of the same family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the closer we become, the more we become friends. My brother is a cute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withladfellowyouthyoungsterchildguy
boy
, he is smart and mischievous. A six-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withladfellowyouthyoungsterchildguy
boy
 enters elementary school with an innocent spirit and still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 and play mobile games. A young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withladfellowyouthyoungsterchildguy
boy
 who is talkative and irritable, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
also
 becomes obedient and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 his family with what he can. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
A
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withladfellowyouthyoungsterchildguy
boy
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 stutters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 is someone I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 a lot. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
A
 relative is also
 a friend. The person I will always accompany and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 throughout my education and in my daily life with my family. Talk, share, encourage each other's joys and sorrows. 