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Write about the generation gap(s) in a family that you know. How big are they? How do people cope with and adapt to them?

Write about the generation gap(s) in a family that you know. How big are they? How do people cope with and adapt to them? EddQD
In our life, we usually have many difference ideas and opinion. This reason create some big conflicts in family. Especially between parents and children in clothes, appearance. Parents and children have difference thinking about type of clothes. Because of the generation gap, parents have their own belief about clothes and children are either. Parents hope their children wear some traditional clothes like: long dress, skinny jeans, normal t-shirt, long skirt, … however, children like some modern clothes such as: jeans with holes, short skirt, body hugging dress, crop top shirt, oversize clothes…. Children want to be liberal so they don’t listen to their parents’s suggest. At the result, they have a big contradict and it is hard to solve. Children wear modern style that makes parents feel dislike and unpleasant. For example, my best friend- Chip, last week, family went to a wedding party, her parents wanted her to wear long white dress. However, she worn crop top shirt with hole jeans. At the result, Chip and her parents had a big conflict before they went to the party. Children’s appearance is also noticed by parents. Teenager nowadays usually like hair dyed in different color, pierced noses, tattoo…. They presume it looks very fashion. However, parents assume it look like a gangster. Consequence, conflicts occur. Especially tattoo, if children have a tattoo, they can’t delete it by anyway. Notwithstanding, in the future, they will repent their decision or not, there aren’t any solution. In other way, if children want to have pierced noses, they have to go though pain. Nevertheless, they are not accepted by their parents and they have to remove it. For example, my friend – My, she has a little tattoo on her hand. When her parents discovery, she had a conflict with her parents. At the results, her parents were sulky her for a month. Is it easy to solve the problem? It is hard to answer. It depends on their thinking and their solution. They should spend more time to discuss, explain their opinion and understand each other. After discussing, they have to think and find their own solution. My friend – Chip, after many conflicts with her parents, she think will wear hole jeans while having time with my friends and wear traditional clothes while having time time with family. Because of generation gap, we usually have different idea with our parents. It is too hard to change their thinking. So we should try our best to solve it in directly way.
In our life, we
usually
have
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difference
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ideas
and opinion. This reason
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create
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some
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conflicts
in family.
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parents
and
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children
in
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clothes
, appearance.

Parents and
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children
have difference thinking about type of
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clothes
.
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Because
of the generation gap,
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parents
have their
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own
belief about
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clothes
and
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children
are either.
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Parents
hope their
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children
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wear
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some
traditional
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clothes
like: long dress, skinny jeans, normal t-shirt, long skirt, …
however
,
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children
like
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some
modern
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clothes
such as: jeans with holes, short skirt, body hugging dress, crop top shirt, oversize
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clothes…
.
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Children
want to be liberal
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so
they don’t listen to their
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parents’s
suggest. At the result, they have a
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big
contradict and it is
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hard
to solve.
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Children
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wear
modern style that
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makes
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parents
feel dislike and unpleasant.
For example
, my best
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friend-
Chip, last week, family went to a wedding party, her
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parents
wanted her to
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wear
long white dress.
However
, she
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worn
crop top shirt with hole jeans. At the result, Chip and her
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parents
had a
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big
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conflict
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before
they went to the party.

Children’s appearance is
also
noticed by
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parents
.
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Teenager
nowadays
usually
like hair dyed in
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different
color, pierced noses,
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tattoo…
. They presume it looks
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very
fashion.
However
,
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parents
assume it look like a gangster. Consequence,
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conflicts
occur.
Especially
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tattoo
, if
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children
have a
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tattoo
, they can’t delete it by anyway. Notwithstanding, in the future, they will repent their decision or not, there aren’t any solution. In other way, if
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children
want to have pierced noses, they
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have to
go
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though
pain.
Nevertheless
, they are not
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accepted
by their
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parents and
they
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have to
remove it.
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, my
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friend
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–
My, she has a
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little
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tattoo
on her hand. When her
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parents
discovery, she had a
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conflict
with her
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parents
. At the results, her
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parents
were sulky her for a month.

Is it easy to solve the problem? It is
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hard
to answer. It depends on their thinking and their solution. They should spend more
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time
to discuss,
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explain
their opinion and understand each other. After discussing, they
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have to
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think
and find their
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own
solution. My
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friend
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–
Chip, after
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many
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conflicts
with her
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parents
, she
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think
will
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wear
hole jeans while having
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time
with my
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friends
and
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wear
traditional
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clothes
while having
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time
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time
with family.

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of generation gap, we
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have
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different
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idea
with our
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parents
. It is too
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hard
to
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change
their thinking.
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So
we should try our best to solve it in
directly
way.
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IELTS essay Write about the generation gap(s) in a family that you know. How big are they? How do people cope with and adapt to them?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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