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Describe a person who wears unusual clothes. You should say: Who is he? How do you know him? What kind of clothes he wears? and explain why do you consider that his clothing choices are weird.

Describe a person who wears unusual clothes. You should say: Who is he? How do you know him? What kind of clothes he wears? and explain why do you consider that his clothing choices are weird. m99gd
Okay, I have many friends of mine who most of the time wear an impeccable dress. However, I know one person who often put on strange clothing and he was one of my classmates in my graduation time. His name is Thompson. He used to wear jeans pants below the waist which makes very different from others. He had a lot of accessories on his clothing just like he is selling those items. Especially the bell shape objects hanging on his T-shirt was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing at that time when I saw it. His shoes were normal but he had made bizarre designs on it. As I said he was my classmate during the engineering, I know him since we first met in the library to get the reference books. Actually, he and I were searching for the same book, Fundamental of Mechanics, and turns out that there was the only book. He offered me to take it and from his dressing style, I thought he may be a student of Fashion Designing. After our discussion only I came to know that we will be joining the same courses. Overall, actually, this kind of dressing mostly fashion designer students prefers to wear, but for others, this kind of dress is really peculiar and funny. So that's why I think he looked weird on that dress.
Okay, I have
many
friends of mine who most of the time wear an impeccable dress.
However
, I know one person who
often
put on strange
clothing and
he was one of my classmates in my graduation time. His name is Thompson.

He
used
to wear jeans pants below the waist which
makes
very
different
from others. He had
a lot of
accessories on his clothing
just
like he is selling those items.
Especially
the bell shape objects hanging on his T-shirt was
so
funny
. I couldn't
stop
laughing at that time when I
saw
it. His shoes were normal
but
he had made bizarre designs on it.

As I said he was my classmate during the engineering, I know him since we
first
met in the library to
get
the reference books. Actually, he and I were searching for the same book, Fundamental of Mechanics, and turns out that there was the
only
book. He offered me to take it and from his dressing style, I
thought
he may be a student of Fashion Designing.
After
our discussion
only
I came to know that we will be joining the same courses.

Overall
, actually, this kind of dressing
mostly
fashion designer students prefers to wear,
but
for others, this kind of dress is
really
peculiar and
funny
.
So
that's why I
think
he looked weird on that dress.
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IELTS essay Describe a person who wears unusual clothes. You should say: Who is he? How do you know him? What kind of clothes he wears? and explain why do you consider that his clothing choices are weird.

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4 paragraphs
228 words
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