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My family and my family hobby.What about you

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There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem. listening music. speaking english french england ispan cbinese mandarin and e. g. There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem. listening music. speaking english french england ispan cbinese mandarin and e. g. There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem. listening music. speaking english french england ispan cbinese mandarin and e. g.
There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem.
listening
music.
speaking
english
french
england
ispan
cbinese
mandarin and
e. g.
There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem.
listening
music.
speaking
english
french
england
ispan
cbinese
mandarin and
e. g.
There are 5 children in my family. They are mother, father, sister, brother and me. My hobby is reading book, writing poem.
listening
music.
speaking
english
french
england
ispan
cbinese
mandarin and
e. g.
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IELTS essay My family and my family hobby. What about you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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