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Failure is the reason determinatiom was nlt stfong enough. To what extent do u agree with this. Give reasons for your answer.

Failure is the reason determinatiom was nlt stfong enough. G910o
Failure is the state or the condition of not meeting a desirable or intended objective, and may be viewed as the opposite of success. It is often argued that, lack of accomplishment is the evidence of absence of aspiration or the person was not determined enough to reach the goals. While, I personally do not agree with the statement because, failing can happen due to many reasons and it is not only bound to one's determination. To begin with, firstly, some people fail not because they lack knowledge or talent, but, because they do not trust themselves that, they can do this and, before even trying they just quit. For instance, if one individual fails once to achieve their desired targets, at some point they start to believe that, they will face failure again if they give it an another try. Also, people do not even try to learn from their past experiences that where they lacked and what kind of mistakes they had made in the past that have led the to failing their targets. Consequently, lack of self-confidence to achieve goals always lead to an unsuccessful situation not a success. Secondly, people who have zero discipline can never be a successful in their lives. Have you ever heard that, anyone who has accomplished something worthwhile has never done it without discipline? For example, people with no self-control, sacrifice, and avoid distractions and temptations can never be stayed focused toward their goals, hence failed in gaining success. In conclusion, failure can happen due to any reason, at any stage of life, or to anyone because of some sort of misshapen or incident in their lives. Additionall, it depends on a person that how they see their failure? As a good news or a bad news and how hard they try to a successful person in their lives regardless of failures
Failure
is the state or the condition of not meeting a desirable or intended objective, and may
be viewed
as the opposite of success. It is
often
argued that, lack of accomplishment is the evidence of absence of aspiration or the person was not determined
enough
to reach the goals. While, I
personally
do not
agree
with the statement
because
, failing can happen due to
many
reasons and it is not
only
bound to one's determination.

To
begin
with,
firstly
,
some
people
fail not
because
they lack knowledge or talent,
but
,
because
they do not trust themselves that, they can do this and,
before
even trying they
just
quit.
For instance
, if one individual fails once to achieve their desired targets, at
some
point they
start


to believe that, they will face failure

again if they give it
an another try
.
Also
,
people
do not even try to learn from their

past experiences
that where they lacked and what kind of mistakes they had made in the past that have led the to failing their targets.
Consequently
, lack of self-confidence to achieve goals always lead to an unsuccessful situation not a success.

Secondly
,
people
who have zero discipline can never be a successful in their
lives
. Have you ever heard that, anyone who has accomplished something worthwhile has never done it without discipline?
For example
,
people


with no self-control, sacrifice, and avoid distractions and temptations can never
be stayed
focused toward their goals,

hence
failed in gaining success.

In conclusion
,
failure
can happen due to any reason, at any stage of life, or to anyone
because
of
some
sort of misshapen or incident in their
lives
.
Additionall
, it depends on a person that how they
see
their
failure
? As a
good
news or a
bad
news and how
hard


they try to a successful person in their
lives
regardless of
failures
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IELTS essay Failure is the reason determinatiom was nlt stfong enough.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
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