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my dream job in the future

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Ever since I was a child, I have always wanted to become a kindergarten teacher. Why do I love this occupation? Because I love children and teaching. Moreover, I find teaching very interesting. I can be creative with lessons. For example, I can create new games that interest children or I can find new teaching methods. This job includes: teaching social skills, basic vocabulary, personal hygiene, art, reading, music, … For me, this job i will learn how to love and take care of children, especially i can practice patience. A saying that brought me to this profession is “ The training of children is a profession, where we must know how to waste time in order to save it” – Jean-Jacques Rousseau

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