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My choice is meeting people directly since, in this method, there are less chances of misunderstanding and more chances of having successful meetings.

My choice is meeting people directly since, in this method, there are less chances of misunderstanding and more chances of having successful meetings. lqAkD
The traditional communication method was meeting people directly. It's still a favorable choice for a lot of people. There is another group of people who prefer to phone rather than see each other due to the convenience that the phone offers. My choice is meeting people directly since, in this method, there are less chances of misunderstanding and more chances of having successful meetings. The purpose of communication is to share thoughts and understand one another. Nobody would want misunderstanding after having conversation. I remember an occasion when I got a text message from one of my friends and it seemed she was upset about something because of me. In order to reconcile with her, I called her right back and asked her what the problem seemed to be. She said she was not mad at me at all and I just misread her message. I believe the misunderstanding occurred since I could not see her facial expressions, gestures, or mood. These nonverbal means of communication would have helped us better understand what we wanted to say. Now, what's the ultimate goal of a meeting? It's to achieve something successful. This is especially true in business environment. In my case, since I am working in a sales department, I have lots of meetings to make contracts. When I need to negotiate with my clients for the conditions of a contract, nonverbal communication is definitely helpful to persuade my clients and to complete the contract in the end. It's because I can use my sense of humor and trustworthiness. Besides, I'm sure that my clients feel closer to me if I contact them in person rather than by phone or something. Communicating by phone surely helps us save time on traveling to meet people. Nevertheless, face-to-face communication is effective in two ways. By delivering exact opinions and emotions when we meet people, the chances of misunderstandings become lower, and successful meetings are more likely. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face communication to telephone conversation in certain situations.
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phone
rather
than
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see
each other due to the convenience that the
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phone
offers. My choice is
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meeting
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people
directly
since, in this method, there are
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less
chances of
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misunderstanding
and more chances of having successful meetings.

The purpose of
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communication
is to share thoughts and understand one another. Nobody would want
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misunderstanding
after having conversation. I remember an occasion when I
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got
a text message from one of my friends and it seemed she
was upset
about something
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because
of me. In order to reconcile with her, I called her right back and asked her what the problem seemed to be. She said she was not mad at me at all and I
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just
misread her message. I believe the
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misunderstanding
occurred since I could not
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see
her facial expressions, gestures, or mood. These nonverbal means of
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communication
would have
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helped
us better understand what we wanted to say.

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Now
, what's the ultimate goal of a
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meeting
? It's to achieve something successful. This is
especially
true in business environment. In my case, since I am working in a sales department, I have lots of
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meetings
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
contracts. When I need to negotiate with my clients for the conditions of a contract, nonverbal
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communication
is definitely helpful to persuade my clients and to complete the contract in the
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end
. It's
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because
I can
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use
my sense of humor and trustworthiness.
Besides
, I'm sure that my clients feel closer to me if I contact them in person
rather
than by
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phone
or something.

Communicating by
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phone
surely
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helps
us save time on traveling to
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meet
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people
.
Nevertheless
, face-to-face
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communication
is effective in two ways. By delivering exact opinions and emotions when we
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meet
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people
, the chances of
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misunderstandings
become lower, and successful
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meetings
are more likely.
Therefore
, I prefer face-to-face
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communication
to telephone conversation in certain situations.
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IELTS essay My choice is meeting people directly since, in this method, there are less chances of misunderstanding and more chances of having successful meetings.

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