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My ambitions and my future plans

My ambitions and my future plans QMmAL
I live in Uzbekistan. From my childhood I was always dissatisfied with my own results because I grew up among adults, even though I was ahead of my peers. My relatives and family members have been almost builders, so I grew up among smart and experienced people who are expert in this field. I spent my summer vacations on construction sites. I tried to be with the project managers in those days. I was eager to participate in the discussions and express my opinion. I participated in the construction of a school, kindergarten and several shops. I have become accustomed to easily finding the flaws of buildings. There are several reasons why I have chosen Turkey: As Turkey has been successful in this sector, I am going to study it in its education system and apply aspects that are relevant to our context. As a participant in this program, I am able to further improve my skills and learn Turkish techniques in the placement of buildings. I think that conducting classes in English will help me to share my experience with engineers from all over the world. The second reason is that Uzbeks and Turks have a very similar culture, language and religion. And that’s why I think that when I am studying in Turkey, the cultural shock will not bother me and will not interfere with my studies. I don't think learning Turkish is a problem for me either
I
live
in Uzbekistan. From my childhood I was always dissatisfied with my
own
results
because
I grew up among adults,
even though
I was ahead of my peers. My relatives and family members have been almost builders,
so
I grew up among smart and experienced
people
who are expert in this field. I spent my summer vacations on construction sites. I tried to be with the project managers in those days.
I
was eager to participate in the discussions and express my opinion.
I
participated in the construction of a school, kindergarten and several shops.
I
have become accustomed to
easily
finding the flaws of buildings. There are several reasons why I have chosen Turkey:

As Turkey has been successful in this sector, I am going to study it in its education system and apply aspects that are relevant to our context. As a participant in this program, I am able to
further
improve
my
skills
and learn Turkish techniques in the placement of buildings. I
think
that conducting classes in English will
help
me to share my experience with engineers from all over the world.

The second reason is that Uzbeks and Turks have a
very
similar culture, language and religion. And that’s why I
think
that when I am studying in Turkey, the cultural shock will not bother me and will not interfere with my studies. I don't
think
learning Turkish is a problem for me
either
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IELTS essay My ambitions and my future plans

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
239 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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