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Mutli National companies products are increasing day by day and it has led to a bad effect on people's life to what extent do you agree

Mutli National companies products are increasing day by day and it has led to a bad effect on people's life to what extent do you agree 7rEVy
It is commonly seen that articles of transnational companies are pacing swiftly, proving detrimental to human lives. I disagree with this view and this essay shall discuss it. On the one hand, there are countless benefits which enhances quality of life. Firstly, products manufactured by international companies are of good quality having more features. Owing to this, people can enjoy better experience from various countries. To cite an example, a japanese mobile phone have ample features as compared to chinese phones, which are not suitable for long period of time as they get damaged by passage of time. That's why people like to buy exported goods and learn about new technology. Second significant feature, international companies supply commodities which are of pure and real quality, providing better interface of sale as compared to goods which take a heavy tall on people's lives because they are not made of pure substances. Although, local markets sell products of low quality which have mixed form of matter, whilst, there are enhanced quality goods sold in mutlinational shops. For example, ghee exported from overseas market is generally of better quality, however the local sale of ghee is of worsen quality. To conclude, mutlinational companies proliferate living standards of people apart from damaging lives of people.
It is
commonly
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seen
that articles of transnational
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companies
are pacing
swiftly
, proving detrimental to human
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lives
. I disagree with this view and this essay shall discuss it.

On the one hand, there are countless benefits which enhances
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quality
of life.
Firstly
, products manufactured by international
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companies
are of
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good
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quality
having more features. Owing to this,
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people
can enjoy better experience from various countries. To cite an example, a
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japanese
mobile phone have ample features as compared to
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chinese
phones, which are not suitable for long period of time as they
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get
damaged by passage of time. That's why
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people
like to
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buy
exported
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goods
and learn about new technology.

Second significant feature, international
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companies
supply commodities which are of pure and real
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quality
, providing better interface of sale as compared to
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goods
which take a heavy tall on
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people
's
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lives
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because
they are not made of pure substances. Although, local markets sell products of low
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quality
which have mixed form of matter, whilst, there
are enhanced
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quality
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goods
sold in
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mutlinational
shops.
For example
, ghee exported from overseas market is
generally
of better
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quality
,
however
the local sale of ghee is of worsen quality.

To conclude
,
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mutlinational
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companies
proliferate living standards of
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people
apart from damaging
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lives
of
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people
.
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IELTS essay Mutli National companies products are increasing day by day and it has led to a bad effect on people's life to what extent do you agree

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