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music is a good way to connect people from different cultures and ages

music is a good way to connect people from different cultures and ages BLD7a
To begin with, music has a great influence on every aspect of life. Though there were many changes in public, music adapting to human perceptions is appreciated in this day and gaps. Music allows folks to groove together, whenever a musical event is held in a concert audience forget everything about the culture, age, gender, color that time only one thing runs through their mind that they are here to enjoy and express their feeling for the music. Although the lyrics can be written in various languages, still help them to feel the emotion which the singer inspires.
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IELTS essay music is a good way to connect people from different cultures and ages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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