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Moving to a new place is not easy, and one can face some problems. As a student you can find yourself in a new environment with new rules and no friends. I believe that schools can help those kids, or at least make it easier for them. Making friends is the best way to get to know a place. Teachers can pair a new student with someone in his/her class so he/she can guide and help, especially for the first week or two. It will get the new student confidents and possibility to build the first relationship. Moreover schools can arrange social events during a day, like sport activity. Social events bring all kind of students together and can be a good platform to make friends and getting to know the place. A small welcome party can also be a good chance of getting our classmates. In addition, schools can group new students together. In this way, new students will have a platform to talk about their problems with someone who might face the same ones. They will be able to share their feelin

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