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A sizeable fraction of the society contends that, instead of paying for community programes , theses services offered as integral or compulsory part for betterment of the society as unpaid. Affirmatively, my personal narrative is parallel to said preposition as I in convinced with doctrine owing to pragmatic and factual strenghts. This essay will discussed the purposed phenomena its not only super benficial for the society improvement but all also communication skills can be improved by putting their own efforts. It should be compulsory part of high school so that children learn how much effort can be done for working activities and also tried to engage in these activities which help to minimize the criminal activities and keep them active to take part role in community.

A sizeable fraction of the society contends that, instead of paying for community programes, theses services offered as integral or compulsory part for betterment of the society as unpaid. Affirmatively, my personal narrative is parallel to said preposition as I in convinced with doctrine owing to pragmatic and factual strenghts. This essay will discussed the purposed phenomena its not only super benficial for the society improvement but all also communication skills can be improved by putting their own efforts. It should be compulsory part of high school so that children learn how much effort can be done for working activities and also tried to engage in these activities which help to minimize the criminal activities and keep them active to take part role in community. E3p1R
A sizeable fraction of the society contends that, instead of paying for community programes, theses services offered as integral or compulsory part for betterment of the society as unpaid. Affirmatively, my personal narrative is parallel to said preposition as I in convinced with doctrine owing to pragmatic and factual strenghts. This essay will discussed the purposed phenomena its not only super benficial for the society improvement but all also communication skills can be improved by putting their own efforts. It should be compulsory part of high school so that children learn how much effort can be done for working activities and also tried to engage in these activities which help to minimize the criminal activities and keep them active to take part role in community.
A sizeable fraction of the society contends that,
instead
of paying for community
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programes
,
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theses
services offered as integral or compulsory part for betterment of the society as unpaid.

Affirmatively
, my personal narrative is parallel to said preposition as I in convinced with doctrine owing to pragmatic and factual
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strenghts
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This essay will
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discussed
the purposed phenomena its not
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only
super
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benficial
for the society improvement
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but
all
also
communication
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skills
can be
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improved
by putting their
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own
efforts. It should be compulsory part of high school
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so
that children learn how much effort can
be done
for working activities and
also
tried to engage in these activities which
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help
to minimize the criminal activities and
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keep
them active to
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take part
role in community.

IELTS essay A sizeable fraction of the society contends that, instead of paying for community programes, theses services offered as integral or compulsory part for betterment of the society as unpaid. Affirmatively, my personal narrative is parallel to said preposition as I in convinced with doctrine owing to pragmatic and factual strenghts. This essay will discussed the purposed phenomena its not only super benficial for the society improvement but all also communication skills can be improved by putting their own efforts. It should be compulsory part of high school so that children learn how much effort can be done for working activities and also tried to engage in these activities which help to minimize the criminal activities and keep them active to take part role in community.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
125 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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