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Motivation latter for stioendium hangaricum

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Statement of Purpose Born in the magnificent valley – Kohat. I belong to a backward rural area, where most people live under the poverty line. Grown in that poor town I had big dreams and to be successful in my life, to achieve this poverty was major obstacle and the only way to get out of this was the education. The education is not that great in my. However, I have never indulged myself in such excruciating and never-ending matters; and instead have always tried to keep my educational liberty on top of my priority list. I have always tried to maintain educational excellence but Since I belong to a humble background as the area which I live in backward development so m family couldn’t afford my education expense, Luckily, I got my first scholarship at high school sponsored by the Dalda foundation. I did well in high school and achieved another milestone by receiving an undergrad fully funded scholarship National Talent Hunt Program (NTHP) at Sukkur IBA. It was a milestone for me because it was given top 100 performers of the country and I deserved it too because without any scholarship I might not be able to complete my graduation. I have always had an interest in electricity and electric devices. I did also got success in repairing different devices at home so I step into the field of Electrical Engineering, which later on directed me towards a specialization in electronics. About the journey of Engineering, I have designed an outstanding and practically working project every semester. This practice kept polishing my technical skills and finally made me able to design an intriguing Final year Project. “Automatic power factor controller” is a device that will work with any load and can help to achieve desired power factor which is needed in different industries. Now that I am almost done with my bachelor's, desires for further educations have gloomed inside me. Having met various delegates from around the world in different technological conferences during my bachelor's, I am highly inspired by foreign educational cultures. Pakistan is a developing country and for a Pakistani to think out of the box, has to go out of the box. My expertise in the fields of programming, control systems, communication systems, artificial intelligence, and industrial electronics. Besides, I have also got hands-on experience in the matters of Linear Circuits Analysis, Network Circuits Analysis, and such core subjects that serve as necessary bases for higher-level researches. Pakistan is a developing country in which 21% of people live below the poverty line. With many other challenges, Pakistan is facing power crises, about 27% of the population lives without access to electricity. Even those whose who have access to electricity faces constantly blackouts and the cost of electricity is higher which makes it difficult to afford it especially for people who live under the poverty line which is 21% of the country. Climate change is another giant that every country is facing now, Pakistan is one of the vulnerable countries come in 5th place in global climate risk. So clean and affordable energy is vital for Pakistan and its climate. Pakistan has great potential in clean energy, especially solar and hydroelectricity. With help of new technology and science as the main theme of stipendium hanaricum, we can propose new solutions and ideas in existing resources and can play a part in society, country, and the world as a whole. As an electrical engineer, I aim to provide affordable and clean energy alternatives to people who can't afford them. There is big scope for investors in clean energy in Pakistan so collaboration with some firms and having the required skills can make the difference Hungry has world class institutions; I can get enough by perusing my master's experience, research and knowledge that can help me in perusing my career as electrical engineering. Also foreign exposure can built some resilience and skills that can open doors to different opportunities to excel in life. I aim to return and contribute my part to people's development and climate change. The direct and indirect beneficiaries will be people who can’t afford the clean energy I believe that stipendium hungraricum is providing great opportunities and I think I will perform well if given a chance. My core interest is to do Masters in clean and affordable energy which can give me great skills and knowledge about that discipline and eventually will help me achieve my aims and goals Hungary is an internationally recognized powerhouse in the field’s technology, education, and tourism, it also offers a lot to international students. It has some top-ranked universities with talented Professors and Researchers. Beside, education hungry has a rich culture, beautiful nature and I am very fascinated about rich heritage of Budapest. It’s my dream to see that city and feel that over 1000 year rich history and culture
Statement of Purpose

Born in the magnificent valley
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Kohat
. I belong to a backward rural area, where most
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people
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live
under the
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poverty
line. Grown in that poor town I had
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big
dreams and to be successful in my life, to achieve this
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poverty
was major obstacle and the
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only
way to
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get
out of this was the
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education
. The
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education
is not that
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great
in my.
However
, I have never indulged myself in such excruciating and never-ending matters; and
instead
have always tried to
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keep
my educational liberty on top of my priority list.

I have always tried to maintain educational excellence
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but
Since I belong to a humble background as the area which I
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live
in backward development
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so
m family couldn’t
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afford
my
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education
expense, Luckily, I
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got
my
first
scholarship at high school sponsored by the
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Dalda
foundation. I did well in high school and achieved another milestone by receiving an undergrad
fully
funded scholarship National Talent Hunt Program (
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NTHP
) at
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Sukkur
IBA. It was a milestone for me
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because
it was
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given
top 100 performers of the
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country
and I deserved it too
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because
without any scholarship I might not be able to complete my graduation. I have always had an interest in
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electricity
and electric devices. I did
also
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got
success in repairing
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different
devices at home
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so
I step into the field of Electrical Engineering, which later on directed me towards a specialization in electronics.

About the journey of Engineering, I have designed an outstanding and
practically
working project every semester. This practice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
polishing my technical
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skills
and
finally
made me able to design an intriguing Final year Project. “Automatic power factor controller” is a device that will work with any load and can
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help
to achieve desired power factor which
is needed
in
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different
industries.

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Now
that I am almost done with my bachelor's, desires for
further
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educations
have
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gloomed
inside me. Having met various delegates from around the world in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
technological conferences during my bachelor's, I am
highly
inspired by foreign educational cultures. Pakistan is a developing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
and for a Pakistani to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
out of the box,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
go out of the box. My expertise in the fields of programming, control systems, communication systems, artificial intelligence, and industrial electronics.
Besides
, I have
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
hands-on experience in the matters of Linear Circuits Analysis, Network Circuits Analysis, and such core subjects that serve as necessary bases for higher-level researches.

Pakistan is a developing
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country
in which 21% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
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live
below the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
line. With
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many
other challenges, Pakistan is facing power crises, about 27% of the population
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lives
without access to
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electricity
. Even those whose
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who
have access to
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electricity
faces
constantly
blackouts and the cost of
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electricity
is higher which
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makes
it difficult to
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afford
it
especially
for
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people
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who
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live
under the
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poverty
line which is 21% of the
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country
.
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Climate
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change
is another giant that every
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country
is facing
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now
, Pakistan is one of the vulnerable
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countries
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come
in 5th place in global
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climate
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risk
.
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So
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clean
and affordable
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energy
is vital for Pakistan and its
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climate
. Pakistan has
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great
potential in
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clean
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energy
,
especially
solar and hydroelectricity. With
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help
of new technology and science as the main theme of
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stipendium
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hanaricum
, we can propose new solutions and
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ideas
in existing resources and can play a part in society,
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country
, and the world as a whole.

As an electrical engineer, I aim to provide affordable and
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clean
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energy
alternatives to
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people
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who
can't
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afford
them. There is
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big
scope for investors in
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clean
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energy
in Pakistan
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so
collaboration with
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some
firms and having the required
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skills
can
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make
the
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difference


Hungry has world
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class
institutions; I can
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get
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enough
by perusing my master's experience, research and knowledge that can
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help
me in perusing my career as electrical engineering.
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Also
foreign exposure can built
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some
resilience and
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skills
that can open doors to
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different
opportunities to excel in life. I aim to return and contribute my part to
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people
's development and
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climate
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change
. The direct and indirect beneficiaries will be
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people
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who
can’t
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afford
the
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clean
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energy


I believe that
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stipendium
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hungraricum
is providing
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great
opportunities and I
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think
I will perform well if
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given
a chance. My core interest is to do Masters in
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clean
and affordable
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energy
which can give me
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great
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skills
and knowledge about that discipline and
eventually
will
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help
me achieve my aims and goals

Hungary is an
internationally
recognized powerhouse in the field’s technology,
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education
, and tourism, it
also
offers a lot to international students. It has
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some
top-ranked universities with talented Professors and Researchers. Beside,
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education
hungry has a rich culture,
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beautiful
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nature and
I am
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very
fascinated about rich heritage of Budapest. It’s my dream to
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see
that city and feel that over 1000 year rich history and
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culture
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IELTS essay Motivation latter for stioendium hangaricum

Essay
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8 paragraphs
812 words
5.5
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