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when one learns a new language, he equips himself with lots of knowldege preataining to a new culture, traditions and literature, as they constitute an integral part of mastering a anguage. It is not just a matter of lerning by heart how to say things or which verbs are regular and which are not, theres more to it than that. One should dive in the culture of the language he wishes to learn so he can speak in a relaxed way and learnhow people use their own language
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to a new culture, traditions and literature, as they constitute an integral part of mastering
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more to it than that. One should dive in the culture of the language he wishes to learn
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IELTS essay a window to another culture

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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