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Motivate why you should be nominated for a KTH Scholarship by describing how you will contribute to the sustainable development goals with a master’s degree from KTH. This should be done by giving an example of a sustainability challenge that you wish to contribute to.

Motivate why you should be nominated for a KTH Scholarship by describing how you will contribute to the sustainable development goals with a master’s degree from KTH. This should be done by giving an example of a sustainability challenge that you wish to contribute to. N37rd
Today, thanks to the Sustainable Development Goals, progress is being made in many areas, but there are goals that still require active and urgent solutions. Disposal of solid wastes is a stinging and widespread problem in both urban and rural areas in many developed and developing countries. Waste management is an interdisciplinary problem. And I believe that architects possess the tools to introduce technological and social aspects that distinguish them from professionals in other engineering disciplines. E-waste is one of the most important concerns that I want to contribute to. The total amount of e-waste used each year grows by 2. 5 million tons. In 2019 the world generated 53. 6 million tons of waste alone and by 2030 the global total is likely to swell to 74. 7 million tons. These numbers make it the world's fastest-growing waste, fueled mainly by people buying electronic products with shorter life cycles and fewer options for repair. Urgent action is needed as this waste poses a major threat to the health and well-being of many people, especially millions of children, adolescents and mothers-to-be around the world, whose health is at risk from the informal handling of discarded electrical or electronic devices. E-waste contains high levels of toxic chemicals, and children exposed to it are particularly vulnerable to the toxic chemicals it contains due to their smaller size, less developed organs, and rapid growth and development. In addition, the drop in sales of electronic and electrical equipment in low-and middle-income countries during the pandemic has highlighted and widened the digital divide between the North and the South, which has also affected other sustainable development goals. At the moment, I not only adhere to sensible consumption of electronic devices but also expand my professional knowledge by designing an e-waste recycling and skill development center in Ghana. Africa is now the country with the biggest dumping sites of hazardous waste. The Global E-waste monitor issued an urgent call in 2020 for all African leaders to take action on this issue. Several hundred pounds of wire are burned during the day and the leftovers are sold to metal traders for recycling. But depending on when the insulation was made, the fumes generated can contain dioxin, heavy metals and other pollutants that pose a serious threat to human health. Technologies have been developed over the past half century to enable this separation to be carried out in an environmentally friendly manner. But even the cheapest solutions tend to be too expensive for Ghana's processors with limited capital. This is the case not only in Ghana; there are more than a dozen such terrible points on the continent. Their number, as well as the area of landfills, will continue to grow. Therefore, it is necessary to find a model that would help dispose of waste in a more environmentally friendly way. Last but not least, it is necessary to create centers that would provide a place for training people and raise awareness among the population. Many states will need such centers in the future. In addition to being able to reduce the negative impact on the environment and human health, the centers will create jobs that will greatly contribute to the achievement of the goal of no poverty. After all, it is not enough to create an object that would facilitate global problems through its functionality; they will continue to grow further. It is also necessary to think about solving a number of social problems in the process. Moreover, the e-waste problem could expand into a global health crisis, largely affecting urban areas if not addressed, as dumpsites cause the quality of land and air to degrade dramatically. I believe that studying for a master's degree at KTH Royal Institute of Technology will help me gain the necessary skills to improve the situation. This problem requires large system-wide changes, but I believe that architecture that provides new developed facilities is one of the key ways to contribute. By being part of the project team that addresses social and environmental aspects, I believe that I can solve them with innovative design and technologies. If the KTH Scholarship is awarded to me, it will be a significant and valuable step for me to move towards the goal of creating a better future, and I know that one day I will provide something meaningful to the individuals that I encounter.
Today
, thanks to the Sustainable
Development
Goals
, progress is
being made
in
many
areas
,
but
there are
goals
that
still
require active and urgent solutions. Disposal of solid
wastes
is a stinging and widespread
problem
in both urban and rural
areas
in
many
developed
and
developing countries
.
Waste
management is an interdisciplinary
problem
. And I
believe
that architects possess the tools to introduce technological and social aspects that distinguish them from professionals in other engineering disciplines.

E-waste is one of the most
important
concerns that I want to contribute to. The total amount of e-waste
used
each year grows by 2. 5
million
tons. In 2019 the world generated 53. 6
million
tons of
waste
alone and by 2030 the
global
total is likely to swell to 74. 7
million
tons. These numbers
make
it the world's fastest-growing
waste
, fueled
mainly
by
people
buying
electronic
products with shorter life cycles and fewer options for repair.

Urgent action
is needed
as this
waste
poses a major threat to the
health
and well-being of
many
people
,
especially
millions
of children, adolescents and mothers-to-be around the world, whose
health
is at
risk
from the informal handling of discarded electrical or
electronic
devices. E-waste contains high levels of toxic chemicals, and children exposed to it are
particularly
vulnerable to the toxic chemicals it contains due to their smaller size, less
developed
organs, and rapid growth and
development
.
In addition
, the drop in sales of
electronic
and electrical equipment in low-and middle-income countries during the pandemic has highlighted and widened the digital divide between the North and the South, which has
also
affected
other sustainable
development
goals.

At the moment, I not
only
adhere to sensible consumption of
electronic
devices
but
also
expand my professional knowledge by designing an e-waste recycling and
skill
development
center in Ghana. Africa is
now
the country with the biggest dumping sites of hazardous
waste
. The
Global
E-waste monitor issued an urgent call in 2020 for all African leaders to take action on this issue.

Several hundred pounds of wire
are burned
during the day and the leftovers
are sold
to metal traders for recycling.
But
depending on when the insulation
was made
, the fumes generated can contain dioxin, heavy metals and other pollutants that pose a serious threat to human
health
. Technologies have been
developed
over the past half century to enable this separation to
be carried
out in an
environmentally
friendly manner.
But
even the cheapest solutions tend to be too expensive for Ghana's processors with limited capital.

This is the case not
only
in Ghana; there are more than a dozen such terrible points on the continent. Their number,
as well
as the
area
of landfills, will continue to grow.
Therefore
, it is
necessary
to find a model that would
help
dispose of
waste
in a more
environmentally
friendly way. Last
but
not least, it is
necessary
to create
centers
that would provide a place for training
people
and raise awareness among the population.
Many
states will need such
centers
in the future.
In addition
to being able to
reduce
the
negative
impact on the environment and human
health
, the
centers
will create jobs that will
greatly
contribute to the achievement of the
goal
of no poverty.
After all
, it is not
enough
to create an object that would facilitate
global
problems
through its functionality; they will continue to grow
further
. It is
also
necessary
to
think
about solving a number of social
problems
in the process.
Moreover
, the e-waste
problem
could expand into a
global
health
crisis,
largely
affecting urban
areas
if not addressed, as dumpsites cause the quality of land and air to degrade
dramatically
.

I
believe
that studying for a master's degree at
KTH
Royal Institute of Technology will
help
me gain the
necessary
skills
to
improve
the situation. This
problem
requires large system-wide
changes
,
but
I
believe
that architecture that provides new
developed
facilities is one of the key ways to contribute. By being part of the project team that addresses social and environmental aspects, I
believe
that I can solve them with innovative design and technologies. If the
KTH
Scholarship
is awarded
to me, it will be a significant and valuable step for me to
move
towards the
goal
of creating a better future, and I know that one day I will provide something meaningful to the individuals that I encounter.
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IELTS essay Motivate why you should be nominated for a KTH Scholarship by describing how you will contribute to the sustainable development goals with a master’s degree from KTH. This should be done by giving an example of a sustainability challenge that you wish to contribute to.

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