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Mother and fathers should be required a course for being a good parents

Mother and fathers should be required a course for being a good parents 7Lb0y
No, all mothers and fathers should not be required to take a course for being good parents. If any older person is present in their family in that case no need to take a course for become a good parents. In that case parents should learn from their older parents how they take care of them and how to manage the time. Parents should choose job in day time. They should avoid night job or try to spent more time with their children. spending more time with children help them to build their bond
No, all mothers and fathers should not
be required
to take a course for being
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good
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parents
. If any older person is present in their family
in that case
no need to take a course for become a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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parents
.
In that case
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parents
should learn from their older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
how they take care of them and how to manage the time.

Parents should choose job in day time. They should avoid night job or try to
Did you mean "spend"?
spent
more time with their children.
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spending
more time with children
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help
them to build their
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bond
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IELTS essay Mother and fathers should be required a course for being a good parents

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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