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Most people want rent on house rather then buying. Writing advantage of rental house.

Most people want rent on house rather then buying. Writing advantage of rental house. 7rmnA
Nowadays many people has buying to rental property like house and many more. According to me I think this is great idea to live in rental house. Many people want to use lease building which are great effect on our liveing standard. People those live in foreign countries they first prefer to buying rentals house rather than they have their oun house. Paying lease is easier than having there owm house. If we what to change our house is easier. Because of rental house rather be a own building. Some time many people have too far distance between there homevand workplace. So they easily change their house. If we suffering any problem our rental house we have to change it. We make our own building then we damage our enough more. Nowadays people has changed building secture within a short period of time. The good things about lease box is to easier to change our house according to time people change thinking. Sometimes people has not enough time to make their own house then they has option to choose rental house. This is good thinking about rental housing. Lease building provide us various kind of helping they are some house is very limited amount of rental house. This thing provide help to poor people which has not available to make their own building.
Nowadays
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people
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property like
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According to me
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this is great
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idea
to
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live
in
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rental
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house
.
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people
want to
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use
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lease
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building
which are great effect on our
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liveing
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buying
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rentals
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rather
than they have their
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oun
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. Paying
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lease
is easier than having there
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is easier.
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of
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rental
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house
rather
be
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own
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building
.
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house
.
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any problem our
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rental
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house
we
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it. We
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own
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building
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things about
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lease
box is to easier to
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change
our
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house
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thinking.
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then they
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housing.
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building
provide us various kind of helping they are
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house
is
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limited amount of
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rental
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house
.
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This thing provide
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people
which has not available to
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make
their
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own
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IELTS essay Most people want rent on house rather then buying. Writing advantage of rental house.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
223 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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