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Most people tend to get news from the internet and/ or from unspecified sources without checking. Consequently, these people might have negative reactions, and lose their faith in good things in life.What are the causes to this problem? Can you suggest some ways to fix them?

Most people tend to get news from the internet and/ or from unspecified sources without checking. Consequently, these people might have negative reactions, and lose their faith in good things in life. What are the causes to this problem? Can you suggest some ways to fix them? NmEWj
With today's modern technologies, people's lives have gradually changed more quickly and conveniently. Thanks to the continuous development of digital technologies and smart devices, watching news is not only for the elderly but also quite popular on electronic websites. Since then, many pages have spread false rumors and lack of authenticity, causing many misunderstandings. And those news, made many people lose faith in the good things in life. In a world full of upheaval, news is one of the media that people pay great attention to
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quite popular on electronic websites. Since then,
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many
pages have spread false rumors and lack of authenticity, causing
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misunderstandings. And
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those news
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people
lose faith in the
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pay great attention to
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IELTS essay Most people tend to get news from the internet and/ or from unspecified sources without checking. Consequently, these people might have negative reactions, and lose their faith in good things in life. What are the causes to this problem? Can you suggest some ways to fix them?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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