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Do you like the city you are living in now?

Do you like the city you are living in now? x87By
For me i think that, maybe yes but there are some issues that I need to consider while living in my city. Talking about the things I like about my city, it is impossible not to mention the development in all aspects here. Development in housing, employment, education, information technology, and more. This is very convenient for those who have just started a business and just moved to the city land to live. In addition, there will be more employment opportunities. Because in the city, the development is extremely fast and many large companies will need a lot of employees. Thus helping us to have more job opportunities and fewer unemployment cases. But there are also a few things that make me unhappy about the city I live in. Chief among them, the cost of living or finding housing is very expensive. For example, the cost of living will increase 4. 5 times compared to the cost of living in the countryside. Or need to find a good place to live, the price is certainly very high. Even in terms of food, drinks, tobacco products, and oils are more expensive in big cities. In addition, environmental pollution is a problem that everyone living in the city has to face. Because in cities, people use personal vehicles a lot, so the waste when discharged makes the environment more and more polluted.
For me
i
think
that, maybe yes
but
there are
some
issues that I need to consider while
living
in my city. Talking about the things I like about my city, it is impossible not to mention the development in all aspects here. Development in housing, employment, education, information technology, and more. This is
very
convenient for those who have
just
started
a business and
just
moved
to the city land to
live
.
In addition
, there will be more employment opportunities.
Because
in the city, the development is
extremely
fast
and
many
large
companies
will need
a lot of
employees.
Thus
helping us to have more job opportunities and fewer unemployment cases.
But
there are
also
a few things that
make
me unhappy about the city I
live
in. Chief among them, the cost of
living
or finding housing is
very
expensive.
For example
, the cost of
living
will increase 4. 5 times compared to the cost of
living
in the countryside. Or need to find a
good
place to
live
, the price is
certainly
very
high. Even in terms of food, drinks, tobacco products, and oils are more expensive in
big
cities
.
In addition
, environmental pollution is a problem that everyone
living
in the city
has to
face.
Because
in
cities
,
people
use
personal vehicles a lot,
so
the waste when discharged
makes
the environment more and more polluted.
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IELTS essay Do you like the city you are living in now?

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  American English
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230 words
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