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What kind of city do you like?

What kind of city do you like? 2RJqx
maybe I like a hustle and bustle city. Because many things make it so attractive to me. First, because I want a city that is always filled with laughter and laughter, and then run faster to get to work, more traffic. So, I feel quite happy because it is very bustling and fun. Second, I love a city that hustles to work. Take Saigon as an example. Along with the transformation of time, the whole city moves slowly like a machine, thousands of means of transport spread all over the road. Saigon streets are always crowded not only during rush hours. This peaceful city is becoming more and more bustling and bustling because it always opens its arms to welcome many people from different lands.
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I like a hustle and bustle city.
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, I feel quite happy
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it is
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bustling and fun. Second, I
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love
a city that hustles to work. Take Saigon as an example. Along with the transformation of time, the whole city
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moves
slowly
like a machine, thousands of means of transport spread all over the road.
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Saigon streets
are always crowded not
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during rush hours. This peaceful city is becoming more and more bustling and bustling
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because
it always opens its arms to welcome
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IELTS essay What kind of city do you like?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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