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Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Give your opinion. VVOO
Someone has rightly said that the Internet is the first thing that humanity has made that Someone has rightly said that the Internet is the first thing that humanity has made that humanity doesn’t understand, the largest experiment in anarchy that we have ever had. We are all bombarded with information on the Internet once we go online. Although some of the information may be wrong but I still believe that most of the information is correct. My first argument is that only if the information is correct, it can enjoy a lasting attraction to readers. With an expectation to have more readers, the author will be encouraged to post correct and authenticated articles which will in turn attract more and more visitors to the website. Otherwise, when the audience comes to know they are being cheated, then they will stop visiting the blog or website. Secondly, as the people are surrounded by such a wide sea of information, they will definitely not believe in one report, but may search out all the related information to compare and form their own opinion. To add to it, the issue of cybercrime has also led to the websites being supervised because of which discourages people to post wrong and misleading information. Plagiarism is also considered an offence and so those posting any information know that they are being monitored. Admittedly, some false, misleading or incorrect information do exist, but the person surfing the net have to learn how to look for the authentic websites. This takes a little time but ultimately people come to know about the websites imparting useful and correct information and then bookmark those sites and avoid going back to the fake sites. To sum up, most of the information on the internet is worth our trust. With the rise of people’s awareness of its accuracy, more correct information will be there awaiting us in the future.
Someone has
rightly
said that the Internet is the
first
thing that humanity has made that Someone has
rightly
said that the Internet is the
first
thing that humanity has made that humanity doesn’t understand, the largest experiment in anarchy that we have ever had. We are all bombarded with
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information
on the Internet once we go online. Although
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some of the
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information
may be
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wrong
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but
I
still
believe that most of the
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information
is correct.

My
first
argument is that
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only
if the
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information
is
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correct
, it can enjoy a lasting attraction to readers. With an expectation to have more readers, the author will
be encouraged
to post
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correct
and authenticated articles which will in turn attract more and more visitors to the
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website
.
Otherwise
, when the audience
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comes
to know they are
being cheated
, then they will
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stop
visiting the blog or website.

Secondly
, as the
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people
are surrounded
by such a wide sea of
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information
, they will definitely not believe in one report,
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but
may search out all the related
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information
to compare and form their
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own
opinion. To
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add
to it, the issue of cybercrime has
also
led to the websites
being supervised
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because
of which discourages
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people
to post
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wrong
and misleading
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information
. Plagiarism is
also
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and
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so
those posting any
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information
know that they are
being monitored
.

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,
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some
false, misleading or incorrect
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information
do exist,
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but
the person surfing the net
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have to
learn how to look for the authentic websites. This takes a
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little
time
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but
ultimately
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people
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come
to know about the websites imparting useful and
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correct
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information
and then bookmark those sites and avoid going back to the fake sites.

To sum up, most of the
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information
on the internet is worth our trust. With the rise of
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people’s
awareness of its accuracy, more
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correct
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information
will be there awaiting us in the future.
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IELTS essay Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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