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some people believe that individual can make a global climatic change .Others believe that the government and corporates could make a change in climatic changes

some people believe that individual can make a global climatic change. Others believe that the government and corporates could make a change in climatic changes 8N0r
Each person has unique qualities in the society. In that case, some people were interested in amending environment, while on the other hand, the responsibilities towards society fails among few people, however, it was not their fault because life includes various commitments. I’m of an opinion that government and corporates could make a change in the public rather than individual person. In fact, government can allocate lot more funds to hamper the weather changes moreover, corporates has massive employees, yet augmenting projects regarding the environment protection would certainly create a good impact in society. Most importantly, the relationship between corporates and government is congenial among the country. Alternatively some people are there in the country who really care for the environment. In general, those personalities are doing awareness programmes in the public, additionaly social clubs are intend to work on unsuspecting environment changes. Despite their contribution, they may unable to afford more money to these issues, But the government have the possibilities to make the change. For instance, On the account of cutting tress for our requirements such as medicine, paper, rubber, and many more, The government is incentive the people to plant more saplings to compensate the action. The veracity is inadequate amount of trees results lack of rain, and rain scarcity leads poor yield, birds extinction, and lot more because one creature is interdependent to another. Intestingly, Miyawaki forest is becoming popular in a particular metro city; the aim of the project is to make dense forest inside the city with some land area. As a result of this, the people who reside beside the forest in cities could get a zephyr and pleasant feeling, specifically it aids the climatic change. Thus, I would agree that government can make a tremendous difference over protecting the climate. However, people should have some responsibilities, but the government have the reinforcement to save the environment for future generations.
Each person has unique qualities in the society.
In that case
,
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some
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people
were interested
in amending
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environment
, while
on the other hand
, the responsibilities towards society fails among few
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people
,
however
, it was not their fault
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because
life includes various commitments. I’m of an opinion that
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government
and
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corporates
could
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make
a
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change
in the public
rather
than individual person.

In fact,
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government
can allocate lot more funds to hamper the weather
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changes
moreover
,
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corporates
has massive employees,
yet
augmenting projects regarding the
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environment
protection would
certainly
create a
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good
impact in society. Most
importantly
, the relationship between
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corporates
and
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government
is congenial among the country.

Alternatively
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some
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people
are there in the country who
really
care for the
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environment
.
In general
, those personalities are doing awareness
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programmes
in the public,
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additionaly
social clubs are
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intend
to work on unsuspecting
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environment
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changes
. Despite their contribution, they
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may unable
to afford more money to these issues,
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But
the
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government
have the possibilities to
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make
the
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change
.

For instance
, On the account of cutting tress for our requirements such as medicine, paper, rubber, and
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many
more, The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
is incentive the
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people
to plant more saplings to compensate the action. The veracity is inadequate amount of trees results lack of rain, and rain scarcity leads poor yield, birds extinction, and lot more
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because
one creature is interdependent to another.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Intestingly
,
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Miyawaki
forest is becoming popular in a particular metro city; the aim of the project is to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
dense forest inside the city with
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some
land area.
As a result
of this, the
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people
who reside beside the forest in cities could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a zephyr and pleasant feeling,
specifically
it aids the climatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
.

Thus
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that
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government
can
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make
a tremendous difference over protecting the climate.
However
,
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people
should have
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some
responsibilities,
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but
the
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government
have the reinforcement to save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
for future generations.
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IELTS essay some people believe that individual can make a global climatic change. Others believe that the government and corporates could make a change in climatic changes

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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