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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. wj8e
Friends are an essential part of anyone’s life. It is believed that people with same opinions as yours make great friends instead of someone who has opposite views. This essay will discuss that even though it is easier to be friends with individuals who share the same thoughts as you, it is illuminating to be friends with the one having different beliefs. People like to be in their comfort zone and they make friends who think like them. In a room full of strangers, it is always a relief to find someone who shares the same opinions and interests as you. For example, when I enter a room where I don’t know anyone, I strike the conversation with my favourite movie and if they like the same film then we have a common topic to talk about. It is the easiest and most convenient way to make friends. People with different opinions can help you look at something from other perspective. The conversation with these people might be difficult for you but it will expand your knowledge for a topic and force you to think on something which you otherwise might have overlooked. For example, I was always a fan of fiction novels and found the non-fiction novels to be boring without giving it a try. After a long conversation with my roommate I decided to read one and since then I enjoy reading them since they teach you a lot about life in general. This essay discussed the advantages of having friends with same and different opinions as you. In my opinion, even after being difficult people to deal with, someone with different views will always help you grow. You will learn new things and teach some to them.
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has opposite views. This essay will discuss that
even though
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friends
with individuals
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who
share the same thoughts as you, it is illuminating to be
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different
beliefs.

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like to be in their comfort
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like them. In a room full of strangers, it is always a relief to find someone
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who
shares the same
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opinions
and interests as you.
For example
, when I enter a room where I don’t know anyone, I strike the conversation with my
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movie and if they like the same film then we have a common topic to talk about. It is the easiest and most convenient way to
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make
friends.

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with
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different
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opinions
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help
you look at something from other perspective. The conversation with these
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people
might be difficult for you
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but
it will expand your knowledge for a topic and force you to
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think
on something which you
otherwise
might have overlooked.
For example
, I was always a fan of fiction novels and found the non-fiction novels to be boring without giving it a try. After a long conversation with my roommate I decided to read one and since then I enjoy reading them since they teach you a lot about life
in general
.

This essay discussed the advantages of having
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friends
with same and
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different
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opinions
as you. In my
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opinion
, even after being difficult
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people
to deal with, someone with
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different
views will always
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help
you grow. You will learn new things and teach
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to them.
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IELTS essay Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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