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Most latino high school students lack of financial information for their decision in choosing a college career.

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As far as I am concerned, students from many parts of the world, not only Latino Americans lack of financial information for their decision in choosing a college career, and of course, this will depend on their social and economical level. Due to the lack of education, students, nowadays are not prepared for universities. According to specialists only 25% of latino american students know what they want to study; the others do not know for some of the next reasons: the pandemic has demotivated them, they did not have enough vocational practices they are not independent enough, they are frustrated or they are afraid of adulthood. Moreover, the majority of latin american regions are known to be third worlds, meaning that they do not have enough public schools or even education.
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parts of the world, not
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Latino Americans lack of financial information for their decision in choosing a college career, and
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, this will depend on their social and economical level. Due to the lack of education, students, nowadays are not prepared for universities. According to specialists
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latino
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students know what they want to study; the others do not know for
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some of the
next
reasons: the pandemic has demotivated them, they did not have
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enough
vocational practices they are not independent
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, they are
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frustrated or
they are afraid of adulthood.
Moreover
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latin american
regions
are known
to be third worlds, meaning that they do not have
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public schools or even education.
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IELTS essay Most latino high school students lack of financial information for their decision in choosing a college career.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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