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Rules of society is the essence that protects its wellbeing; hence, these are preserved with the help of laws which act as a wall against crimes. These come in various kinds and shapes. Some argue that difference among the crimes should not be taken into the consideraton while the prosecution is being held. Thus, they mention, same punishment should be applied for all. However, some discuss that the motivation and the nature of crimes should always matter when deciding on the way of the punishment. I firmly believe that punishments should be applied according to the distinct features of the crimes and, In my opinion, doing otherwise might cause negative outcomes. On the one hand, people are responsible of a plethora of crimes; therefore, the results of each would notably vary. One might merely cause a slight discomfort whereas, person or even a crowd would be affected lethally for some. So, the crimes of the punishments should be thought accordingly otherwise, people might notice that it is easy to be acquited even if an extreme wrongdoing occured. To exemplify, if homicide and insulting result in same punishment, the number of those who experience deadly attacks would tremendously increase. On, the other hand, some claim that the entirity of wrongdoers should live through the same consequences. They depict that this is a vital deed to implement to eradicate the crimes. For instance, nobody might intend to act against the law if an arduous punishment is waiting for them disregarding the features and the motivation of the crime. Although, this might thought to be correct, disadvantages of such aspect would notably appear. This is due to, for instance, politicians and government officials applying corrupt policies to whoever they despise. The convictions of the government critics would ultimately be unfair to a point where all of them are put in the jail for extensive period of time. In conclusion, evaluating and categorizing crimes, thus, punsihing the criminals reasonably signify a crucial value for society. In such society where every wrong act ends up with a fixed punishment, it is challenging to function properly.
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of society is the essence that protects its
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wellbeing
;
hence
, these
are preserved
with the
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help
of laws which act as a wall against
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crimes
. These
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come
in various kinds and shapes.
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Some
argue that difference among the
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crimes
should not
be taken
into the
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consideraton
while the prosecution is
being held
.
Thus
, they mention, same
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punishment
should
be applied
for all.
However
,
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some
discuss that the motivation and the nature of
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crimes
should always matter when deciding on the way of the
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punishment
. I
firmly
believe that
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punishments
should
be applied
according to the distinct features of the
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crimes
and, In my opinion, doing
otherwise
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might
cause
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negative
outcomes.

On the one hand,
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people
are
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responsible of
a plethora of
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crimes
;
therefore
, the results of each would
notably
vary. One
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might
merely
cause a slight discomfort whereas, person or even a crowd would be
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affected
lethally
for
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some
.
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So
, the
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crimes
of the
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punishments
should be
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thought
accordingly
otherwise
,
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people
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might
notice that it is easy to be
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acquited
even if an extreme wrongdoing
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occured
. To exemplify, if homicide and insulting result in same
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punishment
, the number of those who experience deadly attacks would
tremendously
increase.

On, the other hand,
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some
claim that the
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entirity
of wrongdoers should
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live
through the same consequences. They depict that this is a vital deed to implement to eradicate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
.
For instance
, nobody
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might
intend to act against the law if an arduous
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punishment
is waiting for them disregarding the features and the motivation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
. Although, this
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might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to be correct, disadvantages of such aspect would
notably
appear. This is due to,
for instance
, politicians and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
officials applying corrupt policies to
In a formal text, use "whomever", not 'whoever'.
whoever
they despise. The convictions of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
critics would
ultimately
be unfair to a point where all of them
are put
in the jail for extensive period of time.

In conclusion
, evaluating and categorizing
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crimes
,
thus
,
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punsihing
the criminals
reasonably
signify a crucial value for society. In such society where every
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wrong
act ends up with a
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fixed
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punishment
, it is challenging
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to function
properly
.
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Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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