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Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative?

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In today's fast-paced era, publicities are gaining more popularity than they had before. As a result, most manufacturers are selling their products widely depending on advertisements. Personally, I believe that it has both desirable and undesirable impacts on businesses. One the one hand, one of the main beneficial aspects is that product's name will be immediately well-known, when they are displayed on TV or on the Internet

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IELTS essay Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative?

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

66 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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