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Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative?

Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative? e5BqJ
In today's fast-paced era, publicities are gaining more popularity than they had before. As a result, most manufacturers are selling their products widely depending on advertisements. Personally, I believe that it has both desirable and undesirable impacts on businesses. One the one hand, one of the main beneficial aspects is that product's name will be immediately well-known, when they are displayed on TV or on the Internet
In
today
's
fast
-paced era,
publicities
are gaining more popularity than they had
before
.
As a result
, most manufacturers are selling their products
widely
depending on advertisements.
Personally
, I believe that it has both desirable and undesirable impacts on businesses.

One
the one hand, one of the main beneficial aspects is that product's name will be immediately well-known, when they
are displayed
on TV or on the Internet
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IELTS essay Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
66 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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