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Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative?

Most businesses are heavily relying on advertisements. Is it positive or negative? e5BqJ

In today's fast-paced era, publicities are gaining more popularity than they had before. As a result, most manufacturers are selling their products widely depending on advertisements. Personally, I believe that it has both desirable and undesirable impacts on businesses. One the one hand, one of the main beneficial aspects is that product's name will be immediately well-known, when they are displayed on TV or on the Internet

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 the one hand, one of the main beneficial aspects is that product's name will be immediately well-known, when they are displayed
 on TV or on the Internet