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In many countries wedding is getting bigger and more expensive than in the past.

In many countries wedding is getting bigger and more expensive than in the past. xmWyg
An increasing number of marriage happened all over the world. And day by day wedding is make more expensive. Sometimes it became unaffordable for general families. Likewise, it may cause problems such as economical way unaffordable, make lot of noise and pollution, as well as dowry section, people make distinction with each other about arrangements. However, I go with for negative statement marriage is getting bigger and more expensive than in the past. I shall support my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs. There is many reasons that people face that marriage is become bigger and more expensive for present time. Moreover, Nowadays people plan many things in a marriage ceremony. They do destination wedding, booking hotels, Venus. This are really much expensive. Sometimes it make unaffordable for ladies house side. Parents take a lot of pressure for arrangement it. Likewise, the dowry section today it subject is available in our society. Nowadays it called gift or prize session. For example, a middleclass family can't afford all of it. So the family have to sell their property for make a marriage. As a result, Middleclass family convert into lower average family for arranging a wedding occasion. Furthermore, in a marriage ceremony people make competition with each other. They always wanted to make lower view to arranging family. And also a ceremony their happened a lot population and Noise. The arrangements takes four to five days, thats why their were a lot of noise population, waste, food waste. So it districted our ecological balance and keep pressure on our environment. On the otherside, Their some positive effect also with marriage. After many day people get together with their family. Made a good family bonding. Many types of worker have their job by a marriage. Now many youth do find their carrier to arranging a marriage ceremony. For example, many siblings who lives abroad, came to their Nation to attend a marriage occasion. As a result, by a marriage happened a lot of happiness, gritting, gift. So many time people can spend a family time. To sum up, Overall the world is now a bigger occasion for everyone. But as well as it made a lot of expense that Couldn't affordable for everyone.
An increasing number of
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marriage
happened all over the world. And day by day wedding is
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make
more
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expensive
.
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it became unaffordable for general
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families
.
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make
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lot of
noise and pollution,
as well
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people
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make
distinction with each other about arrangements.
However
, I
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go with
for
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negative
statement
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marriage
is getting bigger and more
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expensive
than in the past. I shall support my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

There is
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many
reasons that
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people
face that
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is become
bigger and more
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expensive
for present time.
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, Nowadays
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people
plan
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things in a
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marriage
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. They do destination wedding, booking hotels, Venus.
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expensive
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make
unaffordable for ladies
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house
side. Parents take a
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lot
of pressure for arrangement it.
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, the dowry section
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today
it
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is available in our society. Nowadays it called gift or prize session.
For example
, a
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middleclass
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family
can't afford all of it.
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the
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family
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have to
sell their property for
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make
a
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marriage
.
As a result
,
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Middleclass
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family
convert into lower average
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family
for arranging a wedding occasion.

Furthermore
, in a
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marriage
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ceremony
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people
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make
competition with each other. They always wanted to
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make
lower view to arranging
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family
. And
also
a
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ceremony
their happened a
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lot
population and Noise. The arrangements
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four to five days,
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why their were a
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of noise population, waste, food waste.
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it
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districted
our ecological balance and
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pressure on our environment.

On the
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effect
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day
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together with their
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. Made a
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good
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bonding.
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types of worker have their job by a
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marriage
.
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do find their carrier to arranging a
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.
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,
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siblings who
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lives
abroad, came to their Nation to attend a
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marriage
occasion.
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, by a
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marriage
happened a
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lot
of happiness, gritting, gift.
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So
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many
time
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people
can spend a
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family
time.

To sum up,
Overall
the world is
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now
a bigger occasion for everyone.
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But
as well
as it made a
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lot
of expense that Couldn't affordable for everyone.
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IELTS essay In many countries wedding is getting bigger and more expensive than in the past.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
372 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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