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Morning routine and how breakfast important

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As I'm a creature of habit, I would say yes. I always get up at 6: 00 am, have noodles and tea for breakfast, brush my teeth, then brush up (quickly study) on what we learned the day before in class to make sure I'm well-prepared. After all of this, I start heading to class at 8: 30am. However, on weekends, I tend to hit the snooze button and end up sleeping till 9: 00am then start my day. Absolutely. Many experts state that it is the most important meal of the day. I believe it gives me the fuel I need to tackle my day (to strongly take on the day). Moreover, I think it's critical to have a balanced breakfast to make sure I get all the proper nutrients. I cannot imagine starting my day on an empty stomach!
As I'm a creature of habit, I would say yes. I always
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up at 6: 00 am, have noodles and tea for breakfast, brush my teeth, then brush up (
quickly
study) on what we learned the day
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sure I'm well-prepared.
After all
of this, I
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heading to
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at 8: 30am.
However
, on weekends, I tend to hit the snooze button and
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end
up sleeping till 9: 00am then
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start
my day.
Absolutely
.
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Many
experts state that it is the most
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important
meal of the day. I believe it gives me the fuel I need to tackle my day (to
strongly
take on the day).
Moreover
, I
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think
it's critical to have a balanced breakfast to
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make
sure I
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all the proper nutrients. I cannot imagine starting my day on an empty stomach!
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IELTS essay Morning routine and how breakfast important

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