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Why do we learn English? Today everyone knows different languages is it important to learn them or not

Why do we learn English? Today everyone knows different languages is it important to learn them or not 9BLQw
Nowadays many people learn foreign languages and the most popular among them is english. It is spoken almost everywhere, English is an international language which all like and learn. Our president pays a great attention to educational sphere. As well as other subjects he pointed out foreign languages. Today he bring in a new law about foreign languages. Every person should know English and who knows it well and has a certificate of Ielts or cefr he can get a bonus it means extra money for our salary. We are very pleased to get this information because wide doors open who knows this language. On the other hand, it requires us to work hard and never stop. In my opinion, people should work and practice. As it says: Practice makes perfect. We also must practice then we can make progress. I hope now we can go overseas and share our experiences as our leader said: "Every year we'll send two teachers from each regions to abroad to get high experience with native speakers ". These words inspired us as English teacher.
Nowadays
many
people
learn foreign
languages
and the most popular among them is
english
. It
is spoken
almost everywhere, English is an international
language
which all like and learn. Our president pays a great attention to educational sphere.
As well
as other subjects he pointed out foreign
languages
.
Today
he
bring
in a new law about foreign
languages
. Every person should know English and who knows it well and has a certificate of
Ielts
or
cefr
he can
get
a bonus it means extra money for our salary. We are
very
pleased
to
get
this information
because
wide doors open who knows this
language
.
On the other hand
, it requires us to work
hard
and never
stop
. In my opinion,
people
should work and practice. As it says: Practice
makes
perfect. We
also
must
practice then we can
make
progress. I hope
now
we can go overseas and share our experiences as our leader said:
"
Every year we'll
send
two teachers from each
regions
to abroad to
get
high experience with native speakers
"
. These words inspired us as English teacher.
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IELTS essay Why do we learn English? Today everyone knows different languages is it important to learn them or not

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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