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Government of India giving programs for poor people

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Government of India works ver hard for development of country. Especially when it comes to the complains registered by the people the government is very helpful in resolving the complains in very less time. The law maker of India is also releasing many programs for poor people and students. So they can study well and they can help in development of country. The law maker of India is very supportive for all needy people of india. The government has also started the program of clean india green india to protect the environment in India and maintain the health of people of india. The voting for government happens in every 5 Years
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IELTS essay Government of India giving programs for poor people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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