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having a good momory is the only requirement to be successful in life

having a good momory is the only requirement to be successful in life Xy0JY
Irrefutably, remembering all things shows clever person in her or his life. However, whether should good memory have essential for success in anyone life? In this essay I am discussing this notion with my opinion. To commence with, ability is play vital role for everyone's hectic life. To explain, in this cutting era, a lot of children and people have capabilities to catch up everything surrounding their areas as well as they are equal or more powerful from computer and other device. Consequently, if they quickly consume their maind for emergency time, they can be success in the future. For instance, in this modern epoch, adolescents, who inteligent in their study, they get the highest rank or marks in their life owing to they can extremely require sharp memory for needed time. As a result, success future is depend on person's ability such as how much they could be observed by environment for their beneficial. On the other side, some masses do not think it is important for perfect citizen. To explain, in this day and age, by technology, every could be done anything for amazing career. Due to, modern device plays important role for everywhere. For example, in India 60% of individuals are unemployed but they are the richest men or women in the world by using machine in their companies. Thus, good memory is not requirement for batter life. To recapitulate, although having a good memory is the essential for studing and daily routine as well as compition because they can explain their ideas frot of public, I partially agree with this view due to machine gives good life for successful life.
Irrefutably
, remembering all things
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shows
clever person in her or his
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life
.
However
, whether should
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good
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memory
have essential for success in anyone
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life
? In this essay I am discussing this notion with my opinion.

To commence with, ability is play vital role for everyone's hectic
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life
. To
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explain
, in this cutting era,
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a lot of
children and
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people
have capabilities to catch up everything surrounding their areas
as well
as they are equal or more powerful from computer and other device.
Consequently
, if they
quickly
consume their
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maind
for emergency time, they can be success in the future.
For instance
, in this modern epoch, adolescents, who
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inteligent
in their study, they
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get
the highest rank or marks in their
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life
owing to they can
extremely
require sharp
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memory
for needed time.
As a result
, success future is
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depend
on person's ability such as how much they could
be observed
by environment for their beneficial.

On the other side,
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some
masses do not
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think
it is
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important
for perfect citizen. To
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explain
, in this day and age, by technology, every could
be done
anything for amazing career. Due to, modern device plays
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important
role for everywhere.
For example
, in India 60% of individuals
are unemployed
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but
they are the richest
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men
or women in the world by using machine in their
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companies
.
Thus
,
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good
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memory
is not requirement for batter life.

To recapitulate, although having a
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good
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memory
is the essential for
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studing
and daily routine
as well
as
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compition
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because
they can
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explain
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ideas
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of public, I
partially
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good
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life
for successful
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IELTS essay having a good momory is the only requirement to be successful in life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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