It is true that the number of students who wish to study abroad is rising every day. Moreover, the growing popularity of the foreign education surpasses threats of a financial burden and other disadvantages bound to this education. In my view, there are more advantages than disadvantages because of the new exposure students get while travelling abroad as well as due to a particular academic knowledge they can get only when studying abroad.
Firstly, one cannot underestimate the value of experiencing a life abroad. In addition to studying at a university, a student has to live in a completely new environment with new friends, new surroundings and different habits. While the studies can prove to be very expensive, a foreign experience is so invaluable that it outweighs this disadvantage. For example, the recent survey on the pattern of the students' expenditures has shown that the majority of them prefers to invest in education rather than to other valuables.
On the other hand, there is not only a cost bound to the studies abroad, but also a detachment from friends and family members that can really feel the pain. Although, the students obtain a new experience, possibly better quality of life and an access to the academic products of own choice, it is sometimes hard to feel away from home. However, even this aspect can be outweighed by the possibility to find new friends and close ones. For instance, statistical studies show that a third of the students studying abroad remains in the countries of their alma-mater for good, getting married or finding a job.
In conclusion, there are of course some disadvantages associated with the studies in a foreign country. As a result, there are more advantages that exceed them and that are more valuable and precious.
It is true that the number of
students
who wish to
study
abroad
is rising every day.
Moreover
, the growing popularity of the foreign education surpasses threats of a financial burden and other disadvantages bound to this education. In my view, there are more advantages than disadvantages
because
of the
new
exposure
students
get
while travelling
abroad
as well
as due to a particular academic knowledge they can
get
only
when studying abroad.
Firstly
, one cannot underestimate the value of experiencing a life
abroad
.
In addition
to studying at a university, a
student
has to
live
in a completely
new
environment with
new
friends,
new
surroundings and
different
habits. While the
studies
can prove to be
very
expensive, a foreign experience is
so
invaluable that it outweighs this
disadvantage
.
For example
, the recent survey on the pattern of the students' expenditures has shown that the majority of them prefers to invest in education
rather
than to other valuables.
On the other hand
, there is not
only
a cost bound to the
studies
abroad
,
but
also
a detachment from friends and family members that can
really
feel the pain. Although, the
students
obtain a
new
experience,
possibly
better quality of life and
an access
to the academic products of
own
choice, it is
sometimes
hard
to feel away from home.
However
, even this aspect can
be outweighed
by the possibility to find
new
friends and close ones.
For instance
, statistical
studies
show
that a third of the
students
studying
abroad
remains in the countries of their
alma-mater
for
good
, getting married or finding a job.
In conclusion
, there are
of course
some
disadvantages associated with the
studies
in a foreign country.
As a result
, there are more advantages that exceed them and that are more valuable and precious.
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