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More and more plastic is polluting cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve the problem?

There are always downside in the progress of human capabilities, the invention of plastic dramatically change the whole system, from the start that it provides help to us until the problem arises. This essay will elaborate more on the problem caused by the far most pollutant in the worl the plastic. The main problem that we are now facing in this time is plastics will take more years before it will be decomposed or maybe a century. For example, the plastic products such as plastic bags that are use in the groceries after we used it we will immediately throw it out without thinking that it will add up to the previous plastic garbage that you already threw a couple of days ago. The thing is it will not be decomposed. With regards to this problem the solution that we can do is banning the plastic bags in the groceries which as of this moment it is now a practice in different parts of south east asia they are using banana leaves in covering vegetables or fruits when buying. Second problem, the plastic that are now killing our oceans and seas. Animals cannot recognise the edible to plastics that are floating to waters. For an instance, there are cases back in the Philippines that there are reported deaths of tortoise and even whales the cause of death ingestion of plastic particles that humans throw. With this, I can only recommend that we should limiting or even banning of this type of pollutants when going to the ocean. and regular sea cleaning drive initiated by local government unit will be a great help. To sum this up, plastic can make our life easier, and it's now part of our daily living, but we should put in our mind the damage that it produce, the future generations health are in big risk if we will not controlthe use of this. We should promote the use of recycable materials such as paper bags or banning the use of plastics.
There are always downside in the progress of human capabilities, the invention of
plastic
dramatically
change
the whole system, from the
start
that it provides
help
to us until the
problem
arises. This essay will elaborate more on the
problem
caused by the far most pollutant in the
worl
the
plastic
. The main
problem
that we are
now
facing in this time is
plastics
will take more years
before
it will
be decomposed
or maybe a century.
For example
, the
plastic
products such as
plastic
bags that are
use
in the groceries after we
used
it we will immediately throw it out without thinking that it will
add
up to the previous
plastic
garbage that you already threw a couple of days ago. The thing is it will not
be decomposed
.
With regards to
this
problem
the solution that we can do is banning the
plastic
bags in the groceries which as of this moment it is
now
a practice in
different
parts of
south east
asia
they are using banana
leaves
in covering vegetables or fruits when buying. Second
problem
, the
plastic
that are
now
killing our oceans and seas. Animals cannot
recognise
the edible to
plastics
that are floating to waters. For an instance, there are cases back in the Philippines that there
are reported
deaths of tortoise and even whales the cause of death ingestion of
plastic
particles that humans throw. With this, I can
only
recommend that we should
limiting
or even banning of this type of pollutants when going to the ocean.
and
regular sea cleaning drive initiated by local
government
unit will be a great
help
. To sum this up,
plastic
can
make
our life easier, and it's
now
part of our daily living,
but
we should put in our mind the damage that it produce, the future
generations
health are in
big
risk
if we will not
controlthe
use
of this. We should promote the
use
of
recycable
materials such as paper bags or banning the
use
of
plastics
.
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IELTS essay More and more plastic is polluting cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve the problem?

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