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More & more people now prefer to watch foreign films to locally produced films. What are the reasons? What should government do to improve the situation?

More & more people now prefer to watch foreign films to locally produced films. What are the reasons? What should government do to improve the situation? 70Kyk
In recent times, significant improvements have been made in film industries all over the world. This is because more people are inclined to watch movies either to release stress or enjoyment. The majority of common folk tend to watch foreign films rather than native ones. This essay will first suggest the main witch stimulates them to do so & probable steps that can be taken by the government to prevent this scenario. The most important thing that leads to someone being enthusiastic about the foreign film is quality. If the story is unique & cinematography is good enough, it may attract common people of other countries. Some industries spend a lot of amount budget to make a particular film. Moreover, directors are meticulous to choose scripts as well as artists. For instance, if we consider Hollywood, many producers are ready to spend if they need to, it allows the director to give his best effort to make the movies. On the contrary, it is quite impossible for any film industry like Dhaliwood. Furthermore, the availability of films from other countries induces many to watch. In this era of technology, every type of picture is within easy reach. For instance, a number of OTT platforms like Netflix, Amazon & so on offer many programs by taking a little amount of subscription fee. Hence, the convenience of online it easier for people to watch films abroad. The government may take some initiatives to attract countrymen towards their film. Concern authorities can allocate some budget for film making which may help to enrich the film industry. Consequently, the filmmakers can concentrate fully on making better films. On the other hand, the administration should enforce laws to restrict the release of foreign pictures in local halls. Subsequently, this may allure inhabitants to go for movies of their own industry. To conclude, the government may help to develop their film industry but ultimate changes will come if locals are keen to watch the locally produced films.
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been made
in film
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industries
all over the world. This is
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because
more
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people
are inclined
to
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watch
movies either to release
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stress
or enjoyment. The majority of common folk tend to
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watch
foreign films
rather
than native ones. This essay will
first
suggest the main witch stimulates them to do
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so
& probable steps that can
be taken
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government
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prevent
this scenario.

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important
thing that leads to someone
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being
enthusiastic about the foreign film is quality. If the story is unique & cinematography is
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good
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enough
, it may attract common
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people
of other countries.
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Some
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industries
spend
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a lot of amount
budget to
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make
a particular film.
Moreover
, directors are meticulous to choose scripts
as well
as artists.
For instance
, if we consider Hollywood,
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many
producers are ready to spend if they need to, it
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allows
the director to give his best effort to
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make
the movies.
On the contrary
, it is quite impossible for any film
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industry
like
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Dhaliwood
.
Furthermore
, the availability of films from other countries induces
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many
to
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watch
. In this era of technology, every type of picture is within easy reach.
For instance
, a number of
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OTT
platforms like Netflix, Amazon &
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so
on offer
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many
programs by taking a
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little
amount of subscription fee.
Hence
, the convenience of online
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it
easier for
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people
to
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watch
films abroad.

The
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government
may take
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some
initiatives to attract countrymen towards their film. Concern authorities can allocate
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some
budget for film making which may
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help
to enrich the film
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industry
.
Consequently
, the filmmakers can concentrate
fully
on making better films.
On the other hand
, the administration should enforce laws to restrict the release of foreign pictures in local halls.
Subsequently
, this may allure inhabitants to go for movies of their
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own
industry.

To conclude
, the
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government
may
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help
to develop their film
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industry
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but
ultimate
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changes
will
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come
if locals are keen to
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watch
the
locally
produced films.
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IELTS essay More & more people now prefer to watch foreign films to locally produced films. What are the reasons? What should government do to improve the situation?

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