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Nowadays, the internet has developed a way of exchanging and consuming information.

Nowadays, the internet has developed a way of exchanging and consuming information. J3Qye
Nowadays, the internet has developed a way of exchanging and consuming information. On the other hand, it emerged non-existent problems. This essay will discuss one of the main problems associated with this phenomenon and give some solutions to this problem. The foremost problem caused by Internet information exchanging is disinformation through the web. Recent studies have recorded that 90% of information on the Internet is trash information and most of them tend to propagandize Terroristic views which could impact on Moral sides of some Internet users. On September 11, 2001, The Twins Tower in the USA are exploded by terroristic groups. I think this was a vivid example and motived from hiring innocent people via the web and making them real Terrorists through disinformation and propaganda. A good solution to this problem is that government should organize an Internet Security Agency specialized against web Terrorism and set up a “Blocking” system against trash information. However, it is hard to deal with a particular problem. Another possible solution might be vaccinating the population against Terroristic streams and developing ethics on exchanging web information. For instance, In Uzbekistan, there are plenty of TV programs and religious organizations that strive to transform better mindset by educating them on what information is reliable or not. To conclude, increasing disinformation on the Internet could lead to serious problems as Terrorism. However, a current problem could be tackled by educating and improving human psychology. It is predicted that more and more countries will be forced to take such measures to avoid Global Terrorism.
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information
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On the other hand
, it emerged non-existent
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problems
. This essay will discuss one of the main
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problems
associated with this phenomenon and give
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some
solutions to this problem.

The foremost
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problem
caused by Internet
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information
exchanging is disinformation through the
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web
. Recent studies have recorded that 90% of
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information
on the Internet is trash
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information
and most of them tend to propagandize Terroristic views which could impact on Moral sides of
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some
Internet users. On September 11, 2001, The Twins Tower in the USA
are exploded
by terroristic groups. I
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think
this was a vivid example and
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motived
from hiring innocent
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people
via the
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web
and making them real Terrorists through disinformation and propaganda.

A
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good
solution to this
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problem
is that
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government
should organize an Internet Security Agency specialized against
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web
Terrorism and set up a “Blocking” system against trash
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information
.
However
, it is
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hard
to deal with a particular
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problem
. Another possible solution might be vaccinating the population against Terroristic streams and developing ethics on exchanging
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web
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information
.
For instance
, In Uzbekistan, there are
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plenty
of TV programs and religious organizations that strive to transform better mindset by educating them on what
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information
is reliable or not.

To conclude
, increasing disinformation on the Internet could lead to serious
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problems
as Terrorism.
However
, a
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current
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problem
could
be tackled
by educating and improving human psychology. It
is predicted
that more and more countries will
be forced
to take such measures to avoid Global Terrorism.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the internet has developed a way of exchanging and consuming information.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
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