Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

What are the biggest economic problems in your country?

What are the biggest economic problems in your country? X73k8

Economic issues have been a matter of discussion for the past fifty years in my country. Multiple governments have implied their plans under one authority however, the complications have become more complicated. There are monumental problems with my country’s economy hence, in this essay I will furnish two of them. For starters, mismanagement is known to be one of the main problems in our economy. Due to several years of favoritism and nepotism in the government employment system, the people in power have been unfit for their jobs. Supposedly, the administration has made poor decisions all along. This abuse of power has resulted in hyperinflation over the years. Thus, class stratification has taken over our society. To illustrate, the people who profit from the inflation have become more privileged over the years and those who were from the working middle class are suffering for a piece of bread. As mentioned above, coming from its corrupted cores, poor management has taken the country’s economy downhills with hyperinflation, the collapse of currency value and class stratification. Another problem is international sanctions. My country has been sanctioned for many years to terminate the authorities from expanding military plans. By contrast, the sanctions have never been able to affect the authorities and their way of fraud, nevertheless, they have imposed hardship on the everyday life of normal citizens. Particularly by restricting the importation of goods and limiting our access to international services. In other words, sanctions have not imposed limitations on the gigantic privileged corporations connected to the military programs. Consequently, the unprivileged or the less privileged do not have access to both international and national resources. Considering the situation, it is almost impossible to set up or run a business when you come from a less privileged background. All in all, I elaborated on two of the problems from my point of view one being the mismanagement and the sanctions. To sum up, there are national and international factors affecting our economy with national ones being bolder. As a consequence, those who are the most vulnerable to these issues are the ordinary people suffocating under these conflicts.

Economic issues have been a matter of discussion for the past fifty years in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. Multiple This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 have implied their plans under one authority however
, the complications have become more complicated. There are monumental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecession
economy
hence
, in this essay I will furnish two of them.

For starters, mismanagement is known
 to be one of the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecession
economy
. Due to several years of favoritism and nepotism in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 employment system, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in power have been unfit for their jobs. Supposedly
, the administration has made poor decisions all along. This abuse of power has resulted in hyperinflation over the years. Thus
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 stratification has taken over our society. To illustrate, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who profit from the inflation have become more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhonoredpowerful
privileged
 over the years and those who were from the working middle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 are suffering for a piece of bread. As mentioned above, coming from its corrupted cores, poor management has taken the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecession
economy
 downhills with hyperinflation, the collapse of currency value and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 stratification.

Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuniversalglobalforeign
international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapproval
sanctions
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 has been sanctioned
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years to terminate the authorities from expanding military plans. By contrast, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapproval
sanctions
 have never been able to affect the authorities and their way of fraud, nevertheless
, they have imposed hardship on the everyday life of normal citizens. Particularly
 by restricting the importation of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and limiting our access to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuniversalglobalforeign
international
 services. In other words
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapproval
sanctions
 have not imposed limitations on the gigantic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhonoredpowerful
privileged
 corporations connected to the military programs. Consequently
, the unprivileged or the less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhonoredpowerful
privileged
 do not have access to both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuniversalglobalforeign
international
 and national resources. Considering the situation, it is almost impossible to set up or run a business when you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from a less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhonoredpowerful
privileged
 background.

All in all, I elaborated on two of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 from my point of view one being the mismanagement and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapproval
sanctions
. To sum up, there are national and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuniversalglobalforeign
international
 factors affecting our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecession
economy
 with national ones being bolder. As a consequence, those who are the most vulnerable to these issues are the ordinary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 suffocating under these conflicts. 