A growing number of people in developing nations are buying their own vehicles for the first time. While this is a sign of affluence, it can have a negative impact on the environment.
The main issue associated with the increasing numbers of vehicles is high levels of carbon dioxide emission. Since developing countries have significantly higher population than developed countries, when more people drive cars there the result is a harmful increase in wind pollution. Needless to say, there is a dramatic increase in the incidences of respiratory ailments. For example, the major cities in China are suffering from serious atmospheric contamination, and the WHO reported more than five thousand cases of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome and 300 deaths in many nations in 2008. The majority of them were in China.
Making public transport more reliable and cheaper is the most effective way to discourage the excessive use of private vehicles. Another long term solution to this predicament is to educate young people about the dangers of wind contamination by exhaust gases from automobiles. Children in schools could be taught about how to reduce the problem. They are also likely to teach their parents about the things they learned at school and adults will also be influenced by this initiative. For instance, students in the Netherlands were taught about the consequences of driving their own car in a reckless manner, and now the number of drivers has declined. Furthermore, the most preferable transport of Dutch people is bicycles and using public transport or car pooling is a common means to travel.
In conclusion, a growing number of people are driving their own vehicles, and this is leading to severe air pollution. The most effective method to tackle this issue is to wake up young generations to the dangers of the poor air quality.
A growing
number
of
people
in developing nations are buying their
own
vehicles
for the
first
time. While this is a
sign
of affluence, it can have a
negative
impact on the environment.
The main issue associated with the increasing
numbers
of
vehicles
is high levels of carbon dioxide emission. Since
developing countries
have
significantly
higher population than
developed countries
, when more
people
drive cars there the result is a harmful increase in wind pollution. Needless to say, there is a dramatic increase in the incidences of respiratory ailments.
For example
, the major cities in China are suffering from serious atmospheric contamination, and the WHO reported more than five thousand cases of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome and 300 deaths in
many
nations in 2008. The majority of them were in China.
Making public transport more reliable and cheaper is the most effective way to discourage the excessive
use
of private
vehicles
. Another long term solution to this predicament is to educate young
people
about the
dangers
of wind contamination by exhaust gases from automobiles. Children in schools could
be taught
about how to
reduce
the problem. They are
also
likely to teach their parents about the things they learned at school and adults will
also
be influenced
by this initiative.
For instance
, students in the Netherlands
were taught
about the consequences of driving their
own
car
in a reckless manner
, and
now
the
number
of drivers has declined.
Furthermore
, the most preferable transport of Dutch
people
is bicycles and using public transport or car pooling is a common means to travel.
In conclusion
, a growing
number
of
people
are driving their
own
vehicles
, and this is leading to severe air pollution. The most effective method to tackle this issue is to wake up young generations to the
dangers
of the poor air quality.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes